Talk:Albert Pike Memorial/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:56, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will review. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 09:56, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

• In lead:

• thousands of Masons Can "Mason" be linked properly?

• Mason redirects to a dab page. Freemasonry, which is linked in the first sentence, is the target article. APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

• eighteen Civil War Can we say "18" so that it looks less wordy? WP:MOSNUM also recommends this.

 Done APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

• In Background:

• Albert Pike (1809–1891) Can these years be added in the lead as well?
• Can "brigadier general" be linked?
• Gaetano Trentanove (1858–1937) Do we need the years here?

 Done APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

• Who is Fonderia Galli?

• The Smithsonian lists him as the founder of this statue and others, but that's all the info I have. APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

• In Dedication:

• 2pm Say 2 P.M.
• The quotes would be more attractive if we use quote templates

 Done APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

• In Reception:

• There is not a jot of reliable proof You mean "lot"?

• The quote says "jot". APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

• In Design and location:

• Duplicate links: Morals and Dogma of the Ancient and Accepted Scottish Rite of Freemasonry, Scottish Rite
• Can granite be linked?

 Done APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

That should be it. These done, I would be happy to promote this beautiful article. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 06:58, 7 April 2016 (UTC)

Thank so much for taking the time to review the article. I appreciate it! APK whisper in my ear 01:50, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the fast reply. I believe this article is ready for promotion now. Such an awesome work, I am glad to pass this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 06:35, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

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