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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 20:42, 29 April 2018 (UTC)
I'll take a look at this one, will post comments soon. Kosack (talk) 20:42, 29 April 2018 (UTC)
Initial review:
Lead[edit]
- Matty would appear to be a common hypocorism which should not be included, per WP:ALTNAME.
- Perhaps mention what league Ebbsfleet were playing in when he joined them on a permanent basis as later it mentions he returned to the Football League.
Early career[edit]
- The two-year scholarship is not mentioned in the reference at the end of the sentence, it only mentions that he joined the club at the age of fifteen.
- "all of which from the substitute's bench", should that be came from or were from?
Loan spells[edit]
- "Following a brief return to the first-team set-up at Scunthorpe with two brief substitute appearances in December 2013", bit of repetition there with brief being used twice.
- Link the first use of Hat-trick.
- Link Bromley.
Stevenage[edit]
- "In doing so he became Stevenage manager Darren Sarll's first signing as full-time manager of Stevenage", a bit of repetition of Stevenage could probably just use the club or something similar for the second mention.
- "England's top four tiers in opening months of that calendar year", should there be a the between in and opening?
Honours[edit]
- First award isn't referenced.
References[edit]
- Refs 5, 9, 23, 41, 43 and 45 need an author.
Overall, very little I can find to complain about, a highly polished article. Just a few minor issues so on hold for now. Kosack (talk) 14:06, 30 April 2018 (UTC)