Talk:Phyllis' Wedding/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:24, 22 September 2012 (UTC)

• Image: This really isn't needed and doesn't have a good rationale

• Yeah, I removed it earlier and another editor re-added it. I've removed it again, as I agree it doesn't add much to article. Ruby 2010/2013 02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

• Intro: I would move the bit about the drums to the third paragraph and add a bit about guest stars to the first

•  Done Ruby 2010/2013 02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

• Synopsis: "Dwight doesn't…" -> "Dwight does not…"

•  Done Ruby 2010/2013 02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

• Synopsis: "his and Pam's song." Maybe add what that song is. I can't remember off the top of my head…

•  Done (It was You Were Meant for Me) Ruby 2010/2013 02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

• Production: "his fifth such credit for the series" Is there a cite for this?

• I added the four episodes he directed as citations. Ruby 2010/2013 02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

• Production: "It features the first wedding from the series." I feel this is a tad clunky. Maybe "The episode is the first of the series to revolve around a wedding."

•  Done Ruby 2010/2013 02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

• Reception: graded the episode with an A -> graded the episode with an "A" Add quotes

•  Done Ruby 2010/2013 02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

• References: Ref. 5 and 11 have quote issues

•  Fixed Ruby 2010/2013 02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

• Categories: Make sure they're in alphabetical order. Just a little nit picky. ;)

•  Done Ruby 2010/2013 02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

That's all I could find. Good article! On hold.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 03:10, 24 September 2012 (UTC)

• All should be fixed. Thanks for the review! Ruby 2010/2013 02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Looks good! I will pass! :)--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:09, 25 September 2012 (UTC)