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Armament of the Iowa class battleship[edit]

I am nominating this because I feel that it meets all set and established criteria for A-class, and because I feel that with a little effort it could easily become featured, as Kirill pointed out on the Iowa-class battleship peer review :) TomStar81 (Talk) 23:57, 16 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • Support, very nice. Can see few improvements; some copyediting needed. Also, could you include the yield of the nuclear Tomahawk, and a bit about the target identification/guidance mechanism of the Tomahawk? The section on the guidance of the Harpoon is present but could do with a few line breaks and possibly some wikification and light de-jargonning. The Land 17:37, 18 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support Meets all the criteria, although a little copyediting wouldn't hurt. Carom 18:24, 18 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support Contains some subjective language ("fearsome" is used a couple of times without quotation marks) but otherwise is definitely A-class material. Cla68 23:26, 18 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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