Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/5th Army (Russia)

5th Army (Soviet Union)[edit]

Another article on a Soviet field army that's nearly ready to be upgraded. Appreciate comments on what needs to be done for this to reach A-class status. Buckshot06 (talk) 01:30, 24 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Carom[edit]

A few comments:

The lead needs to be expanded, I think. It should really provide both an overview of, and an introduction to, the rest of the article.

Unless you have strong philosophical objections, there should really be an infobox.

Something I realised just after I set the peer review request up - I'll put one in. Buckshot06 (talk) 04:11, 24 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I would perhaps either incorporate the order of battle directly into the text, or move it so that is less visually disruptive.

You might want to adopt a more conventional Notes-References-External links format, but that's somewhat of a personal preference.

Any images available? They would certainly be nice additions.

Hopefully these comments are helpful. Carom (talk) 02:17, 24 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]