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Feedback from ONUnicorn

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@ONUnicorn: Hello, Check out this article if possible. If there is a problem, tell me to correct it. If there is no problem, transfer. Thankful--N (talk) 09:11, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I've taken a look at it. I added a clarify template near a passage that is confusing. You could also stand to expand the part about the school a little bit - how important is the school? Why did Dotin start a school? Also, the importance of the awards is not particularly clear. How prominent are these awards? Is this like the company winning the Iranian business equivalent of an Oscar award? Or is it more like the equivalent of being named a "super lawyer"? (For context, since Wikipedia has no article on the super lawyer awards - in the United States there are various organizations that lawyers can pay to be included on lists of state super lawyers - law offices will often include these prominently in their marketing materials but they are really meaningless.) The awards section needs more context. ~ ONUnicorn(Talk|Contribs)problem solving 13:23, 25 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The first case refers to Core banking. I linked to the article. In the case of school, I can delete it now. To expand with more resources in the future.
About awards,
N (talk) 09:07, 26 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@ONUnicorn N (talk) 08:24, 28 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I modified the section on awards with some of the information you put here on the talk page. I also added an AFC template. If you think it's ready push the button that says "Submit the draft for review!" ~ ONUnicorn(Talk|Contribs)problem solving 14:36, 29 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@ONUnicorn How long does the review take?!! N (talk) 18:50, 12 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]
As the template says, it can take 4 months or more. It was submitted on March 31, so I'd be concerned if it's not been reviewed by the end of July. ~ ONUnicorn(Talk|Contribs)problem solving 13:56, 13 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Requested move 8 July 2022

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The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Procedural close. Reviewers must be allowed to check this submission before it can be moved. If approved, then this page will be moved without need of a formal move request. Thanks and kudos to editors for your input; good health to all! P.I. Ellsworth , ed. put'r there 04:27, 12 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Draft:DotinDotinN (talk) 06:18, 8 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@نارنجستان, this page will be reviewed within the next four months. WP:RM is not used for this purpose. Kpddg (talk) 16:23, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Kpddg It has been left unchecked for nearly four months. N (talk) 17:07, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Still, WP:RM should not be used to circumvent the review process. Please allow for the review process to finish. JIP | Talk 17:56, 11 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

sources

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hi, The best source is technology magazine. Other sources are websites and official national newspapers ref: 1 2, 3 N (talk) 18:51, 28 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Kvng: N (talk) 18:51, 28 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@نارنجستان, which one is Technology Magazine? We need WP:RELIABLE sources and I'm a bit out of my element evaluating these. ~Kvng (talk) 19:27, 28 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
https://peivast.com/p/122833 / peivast Magazine N (talk) 17:02, 30 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@نارنجستان, thanks, yes that looks good. The other two are both from Iranian Students' News Agency so that counts as a single source but it appears to be reliable. Can you suggest a third source for me to look at? ~Kvng (talk) 13:48, 3 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Aftab Newspaper
It has an article titled "نگاهی به تجربه »مدرسه داتین« برای حل معضل منابع انسانی شرکت ها" about Dotin School
And
More source in ILNA N (talk) 10:05, 4 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
and asre tarakonesh Magazine (ماهنامه عصر تراکنش | English: Transaction age) (No. 36), It has an article titled کوچ بزرگ؛ گفت‌وگو با فرهنگ فرزان N (talk) 10:11, 4 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]