Talk:Elizabeth Birr Moje

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Mentor comments[edit]

I'm making suggestions here as Yendys112233's mentor, and I'm not commenting either way on the draft or it's acceptance.

A couple recommendations:

We almost never want external links in the body of the article. Some phrases don't need to be linked at all, like "Latina/o Studies Program in the College of Literature, Science, and the Arts". Some could be converted to citations. It looks like you've already worked out how to format a citation, but I can help if you'd like support on this.
Citations for books in the modern era should ideally include an ISBN if one is available. The cite book template you're already using has an isbn parameter for this use.

Let me know if there are more specific questions or ways I can help. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 17:20, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you SO much!! This is incredibly helpful, I am just a little confused on what I need to fix with the book citations? Should all of my links be removed and changed to citations? Thank you again!! Yendys112233 (talk) 18:03, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

For the book citations, I looked a little further and it seems like maybe the publications do not have ISBNs. For example, the one entitled "Life Experiences and Teacher Knowledge" appears to be a 17-page ethnographic study. Is that best described as a book.

For the links, all should either be removed or changed into citations. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 18:11, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

okay thank you!! Yendys112233 (talk) 18:26, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

is it okay to have 3 footnotes after the arthur thurnau professorship/couple other things following that, or should it just be one footnote and then the rest just listed as general sources at the bottom? Yendys112233 (talk) 18:28, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

and you're saying I should unlinked all of the journal publications I listed? Yendys112233 (talk) 18:29, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]