Talk:2005 Football League Championship play-off final/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 08:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"took part in play-off semi-finals;" - shouldn't it be the play-off semi-finals;
Not necessarily, it's not been in a problem in the other 20 or so GAs, and it reads fine to me. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:34, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Should East London be wikilinked?
Why not. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Who was involved in the defensive mix up that allowed Kuqi to score?
Added. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Preston North End played Derby County, the first leg being played at" - repetition of the word "played"
Reworded. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"after David Nugent beat Lee Camp in the Derby goal after picking up a flicked pass from Chris Sedgwick." - I beleive the first use of the word "after" can be changed to an appropriate relevant alternative word
Adjusted. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink header to the approrpiate article on the first mention
Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:39, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Repka's full name should be mentioned here and not in the summary since it is the first time he is mentioned
Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Maybe clarify it was Brian O'Neill's right eye that got headbutted?
Sure. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink Football League Division Two
Fixed name and linked. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Preston had played in the second tier of English football since gaining promotion in the 1999–2000 season as champions of Football League Division Two, and had not played" - repetition of "played"
Addressed. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"Winning the play-off final was estimated to be worth" - estimated by whom?
The media. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"who represented the West Riding County Football Association." - not mentioned by ESPN. Another source will be needed to verify this
West Riding is Yorkshire, so I'll use the BBC source. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:47, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Wikilink Millennium Stadium and free kick
Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:52, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Delink Tomáš Řepka and just his surname is sufficent
Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:52, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"twisting his knee." - right knee
Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:52, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Why was Walker booked just after sustaining his knee injury?
None of the sources state it explicitly but he carried the ball out of the area so I would assume it was handball/denying a goal-scoring opportunity, but as it's not verifiable, it can't go in. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:52, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Reference 21 is missing the newspaper that printed the story
Done. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:54, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Am putting the review hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 11:53, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Cheers, MWright96, all addressed and/or responded to. Thanks for your review. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 16:54, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:34, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]