Talk:2006 Football League Trophy final/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:52, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
Shall review. MWright96 (talk) 17:52, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
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Lead
[edit]- "The match was the 23rd final of the domestic cup competition for teams from Football Leagues One and Two, the Football League Trophy." - how about The match was the 23rd final of the Football League Trophy, a domestic cup competition for teams from Football Leagues One and Two.
- "The final was contested between League One side Swansea City and League Two side Carlisle United." - repetition of the word "side"
- "was their top goalscorer in the competition," - how about tournament for variety?
- Wikilink crossing to Cross (association football)
- Wikilink the term volley to Volley (association football) and header to Header (association football)
Carlisle United
[edit]- "League Two side Carlisle United " - club for variety
- Wikilink the term corner kick
Swansea City
[edit]- The wikilink in the word "A" in the second column in the table should be corrected to Layer Road
- "In the second round, Swansea recorded a comfortable 4–0 victory over Rushden & Diamonds." - the word "comfortable" isn't particularly encyclopedic
- "The only goal of the game was scored shortly before half time by Akinfenwa, his fourth goal of the competition," - repetition of the term "goal"
Background
[edit]- "Carlisle entered the final having won seven of their previous eight fixtures and having not suffered a defeat for nine league games." - and were not beaten in their last nine league games.
- "and won the 1997 final." - and victory in the 1997 final.
Pre-match
[edit]- "Carlisle were dealt a blow" - please reword the text in bold to a more formal, encyclopedic phrase
- Wikilink cup-tied
- The percent symbol should be replaced by per cent per MOS:PERCENT
- Wikilink play-off finals to English Football League play-offs
Aftermath
[edit]- "Regarding his goal, Trundle has described the effort as the best goal he scored during his career," - repetition of the word "goal"
Summary
[edit]- Wikilink offside to Offside (association football)
- "Swansea retook the lead with nine minutes remaining, Trundle playing through Akinfenwa," - the first comma is not appropriate in this instance
References
[edit]- Reference 3 sends me to the Football Club History Database source and not the one from the RSSSF
- The hyphens in reference 13 should be replaced by en dashes (–)
- Ref 35: "Carlisle United 1 Swansea City 2"" A comma is missing between "1" and "Swansea"
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 08:12, 25 July 2020 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Thanks very much for the review, I've amended all of the points above. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 16:52, 25 July 2020 (UTC)
- @Kosack: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 17:21, 25 July 2020 (UTC)