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Reviewer: Jimfbleak (talk contribs count) 13:35, 6 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

OK, I'll do this too. Comments to follow Jimfbleak - talk to me? 13:35, 6 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • female is a speckled grey-brown and immature birds look like the female. — I'd be inclined to replace "and" with a semicolon
  • Myzomela — Give the origin of this name since you've done it for nigra
  • Previously classified...—is it possible to split this rambling sentence?
  • The Black Honeyeater ...They are dependent — changes from singular to plural
  • 15 millimetres (0.59 in) eggs — do you have the width of the eggs too?
  • Be consistent in your refs, eg
  • J.M. Peter and W.K. Steele — other co-authors are surname-initials
  • 11040–11045, but 1133–43

Jimfbleak - talk to me? 09:23, 7 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for this feedback, Jimfbleak. These are all done Marj (talk) 19:55, 7 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I think I'll take a photo of an emu bush, given that these birds are uncharacteristically on a Jacaranda.Marj (talk) 19:55, 7 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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GA review (see here for criteria)
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