Talk:Cobra Kai season 3
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:35, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'll be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:35, 16 September 2021 (UTC)
- @TheDoctorWho: Sorry about the week delay. I have been unexpectedly busy. I will be free this Sunday so expect comments by then. Again, sorry for the delay. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:36, 24 September 2021 (UTC)
- No worries, I've been pretty preoccupied with my FAC lately so it works out. TheDoctorWho (talk) 02:26, 25 September 2021 (UTC)
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[edit]- The first sentence has a lot of commas. Try removing some.
- All plot summaries are less than 200 words so they pass MOS:TVPLOT.
- The second episode's summary has the phrase "in order to" three times.
- Netflix is linked twice in #Development (MOS:DUPLINK).
- Netflix is linked again in #Awards_and_nominations (MOS:DUPLINK).
- Disney+ is linked twice in #Awards_and_nominations (MOS:DUPLINK).
- "On May 9, 2019" – the cited source is from May 2
- "Later that month" – the cited source is from the following year
- Add a serial comma between "Josh Heald, Jon Hurwitz and Hayden Schlossberg".
- Add a serial comma between "Will Smith, James Lassiter and Caleeb Pinkett".
- "seasons release" → "season's release" (American English)
- "thorughout" – typo
- Add a MOS:GEOCOMMA after "Marietta, Georgia".
- Add commas after "Later that month" and "June 2020".
- Add a comma after "As part of the move".
- Add a comma after "Rotten Tomatoes".
- Remove the comma after "90% approval rating".
- Add a comma after "MTV Movie & TV Awards".
- Add a comma after "Screen Actors Guild Awards".
- ScreenRant → Screen Rant
- AV Club → The A.V. Club
- Mark references from The Telegraph with "|url-access=registration".
- Salong → Salon
- Sources from The Futon Critic can only be archived through https://archive.ph/.
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: All taken care of. TheDoctorWho Public (talk) 15:25, 26 September 2021 (UTC)
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