Talk:Fastra II/GA2
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GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk) 23:55, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
- Comments
- Is it 'Fastra' or 'FASTRA'? If it is not an acronym, it should be the former. If such, all instances need to be changed to this.
- I'm a little uncertain if the image meets the fair use criteria. In particular, it would only be accepted if the computer is not available for the public to take images of. I'll allow it under doubt, but I won't support it if other people feel it is a breach.
- How about merging the whole lead into one paragraph. As they stand now, they are too short to be paragraphs.
- The information about the project's goal and the issues are unreferenced.
- All information in the lead should be mentioned in the body as well. This includes issues such as price.
Placing on hold. I'm getting a little tired, so I might find some more stuff next time I have a look too. Arsenikk (talk) 23:55, 8 October 2010 (UTC)
- Most issues adressed. However, I decided to keep the image in the article, since I consider it 'demonstrational' by showing the graphics cards in action and running. Also, what do you mean with "body" in this case? HeyMid (contributions) 16:30, 9 October 2010 (UTC)
- The body of the article is the main section of text (including everything except the lead and the captions). What is 'FASTRA' an abbreviation for? Arsenikk (talk) 14:59, 10 October 2010 (UTC)
- Not really an abbreviation, but it probably stands for "fast", because it is a fast computer. HeyMid (contributions) 19:56, 10 October 2010 (UTC)
- The body of the article is the main section of text (including everything except the lead and the captions). What is 'FASTRA' an abbreviation for? Arsenikk (talk) 14:59, 10 October 2010 (UTC)