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GA Review

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Reviewer: Nick-D (talk) 10:08, 10 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

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This article easily meets the GA criteria - great work. My suggestions for further improvements are:

  • The lead should (briefly) identify what Plan Z was
  • "The ship's radius of action was to be at least equal that of the Deutschland-class cruisers" - it would be best to specify what that was in this article to save people from having to follow the link
  • Assessments by historians on the merits of the various designs would probably be worth including
  • It would be interesting to discuss the ships' planned aviation capabilities, as these seem unusually large

Assessment against the GA criteria

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Nick-D (talk) 10:08, 10 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing the article. I'll probably hold off on making the suggested improvements (all of which are excellent, btw) until I'm ready to take the article to ACR/FAC, but I didn't want you to think I missed the review page. Thanks again. Parsecboy (talk) 03:14, 13 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]