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![]() | A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on March 27, 2012. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that when Herbert Ernest Hart was appointed Deputy Controller of the Imperial War Graves Commission based in Jerusalem, unrest in the region meant he had to live in Cairo instead? | ||||||||||||
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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 13:17, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
- Generally, very short sections are frowned upon. I suggest merging "Early Life" and "Military career" into one.
- "... but his application was declined. " -- Why was this? Because of his age?
- "He was also active in the Volunteer Force, being elected as a lieutenant of the Carterton Rifle Volunteers." -- You'll have to explain the meaning of "elected" here, or link to the practice, as it's unfamiliar to a global audience that you can be "voted" an officer.
- Repetition: "In 1930, Hart applied for and was appointed to the position of Administrator of Western Samoa, which was then administered ..."
- " his wife initially moved to Cairo because of the general civil unrest in Palestine at the time ..." is there anything you can link to for this?
- Dup links tool is showing five results: Second Boer War; First World War; Imperial War Graves Commission; New Zealand Rifle Brigade (Earl of Liverpool's Own); Wellington (City of Wellington's Own) and Hawke's Bay Regiment
- Have fixed the last two which definitely appear in the body of the article twice, but unless I'm being totally blind I think the first three must be getting picked up from the lead or infobox; it is my understanding that this is acceptable. Let me know if I am wrong or overlooking a doubleup in the article body somewhere. Zawed (talk) 08:33, 9 January 2013 (UTC)
- One image needs permissions: File:BG H Hart.jpg (I assume it's public domain but this needs to be cleared up)
- Dab links and external links show no problems. There are no issues with stability or neutrality. All other images appear to be properly licensed.
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