Talk:Q111, Q113, and Q114 buses/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:18, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:18, 9 March 2018 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y (16.7% is highest, due to incidental parallels) 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No Dead links N

  Ref 18: "Lucev, Emil (June 18, 2010). "Historical Views of the Rockaways: The old Far Rockaway Station Plaza, Mott and Central Avenues, 1922". rockawave.com. The Wave."

 Done

• Ref 53: "Rosenberg, Miriam (March 16, 2007). "New Routes For Old Bus Lines". Wave of Long Island. Retrieved December 16, 2015." are both dead.

 Done

• No missing citations N

• Rockaway Road and the Jamaica and Rockaway Turnpike are now called Rockaway Boulevard (in Queens) and the Rockaway Turnpike (in Nassau). needs a citation.

 Done - by Epicgenius

Prose Suggestions

• The original streetcar line began at a terminal at 160th Street (originally Washington Street) does this mean that it was known at the time as Washington Street, or simply was once, before this, named Washington street? If the first, suggest The original streetcar line began at a terminal at 160th Street (at that time known as Washington Street), if the second The original streetcar line began at a terminal at 160th Street (once known as Washington Street).

 Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:51, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

• The accident killed two people in the car as well as injured 25 people on the bus, three of them critically. is it known how many were in the car? Suggest The accident killed the two people in the car as well as injured 25 people on the bus, three of them critically. if only two, else The accident killed two of the people in the car as well as injured 25 people on the bus, three of them critically.

 Done--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 21:51, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

• @Epicgenius: That is all my suggestions. I will pass once the missing refs and dead links are fixed. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:11, 20 March 2018 (UTC)

  Drive by comment, per the GA criteria dead links do not have to be fixed. Although they can be fixed if you want to anyways. Kees08 (Talk) 08:42, 21 March 2018 (UTC)