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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Johnny Williams (rugby player 1882–1916)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 17:14, 15 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 17:14, 15 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Here's what needs fixing:

  • The refs in the table needed publishers.
  • The lead needs expansion.
  • Found a couple terms that should've been linked.

Will do the rest later, but as an aside once I finish the review I'll just make the fixes myself since the writer's no longer active. Wizardman 02:47, 26 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I fixed whatever issues I saw. I will say that the article does feel like it gets bogged down in the stats a little bit, so it couldn't hurt to tweak that. Despite that irk, I'd consider this article GA quality, so I'll pass it as such. Wizardman 22:57, 4 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'm happy to run with this if you want further aid or improvements. FruitMonkey (talk) 00:20, 5 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]