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I have shortened the first mention. I think that there is a need to mention it in connection with the timeframe, and then mention the numismatic 1913 aspect. It would be tough to bring them together. BTW, I am aware we don't have an image of a "NO CENTS" nickel, I'm working on that and hope to have one by Thursday.--Wehwalt (talk) 02:09, 7 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Images taken care of. Not the best condition on the coins, but as I paid for them, they will have to do.--Wehwalt (talk) 19:04, 9 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 02:45, 26 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

General Comments: These are comments that arise as I read through the article. Some of them have to do with language; I'm not comfortable enough with my own writing as to actually attempt any copyediting, so I rather leave it up to you to decide whether my comment is sensible or not. The following comments have little bearing on the GA review.

  • "It was struck for circulation from 1883 until 1912" → "It was circulated between 1883 and 1912" Not that big of the deal, but perhaps the original version has some redundancy ("struck for circulation" versus "circulated").
  • "...at least five pieces were surreptitiously struck dated 1913." → What do you mean by "surreptitiously struck"? Unauthorized? Admittedly, it might be because I don't know the word very well (I had to look it up), so it's difficult for me to put into the context of the sentence.
  • I didn't find it clear that the second paragraph of the lead was referring to the Liberty Head nickel. As such, I think the following change would be positive: "Only the new five-cent piece was approved, and went into production in 1883." → "Only the new five-cent piece was approved, and went into production in 1883 as the Liberty Head nickle." (Or, something similar, at least.)
  • "Beginning in 1911, the Mint began work to replace the Liberty head design, and a new design, which became known as the Buffalo nickel, went into production in February 1913." → I think this would be clearer as follows, "Beginning in 1911, the Mint began work to replace the Liberty head design, with a new design, which became known as the Buffalo nickel, which went into production in February 1913."
  • "Well-known sculptor James Earle Fraser approached Treasury officials, who were impressed with his work." → Were they impressed with his work before he approached them, or after? This sentence seems to suggest the former, but I am just making sure.
  • The table at the end is sort of awkward, largely because it hurts the article aesthetically. I think the table would look nicer if it was designed with six columns, instead of two (or nine, instead of three; or maybe seven, since only two years have marks).

Now, for the review;

  1. Well-written: The language is clear and concise, and the article follows the manual of style.
  2. Factually accurate and verifiable: Citations and references look good.
  3. Broad in its coverage: Yes.
  4. Neutral: Yes (no random insertions of, "man, this nickle sucks!")
  5. Stable: Yes.
  6. Illustrated: Yes, and the image tags are all legitimate.

Therefore, I see no reason this should not pass as a good article. JonCatalán(Talk) 02:45, 26 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.