Talk:Music of Xenosaga/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tea with toast (talk) 05:30, 5 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Issues needing to be addressed

Overall, the article is fairly well written, but there is one sentence in the Episode II section that needs to be looked over:

He feels that, primarily because he "slashed the orchestral sound while creating the music" so that the music played using the PlayStation 2's sound chip would match the music played off of the CD, that the sound quality and balance of the soundtrack is poor

Technically, I don't think violates any rules, but it contains too many dependent clauses for it to read easily. Please re-write this. --Tea with toast (talk) 00:32, 12 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Well, bad grammar and difficult-to-read prose is always against the rules. Fixed, I think. --Pres N 01:43, 12 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Review of Article

I find that this article meets the GA criteria:

Article is well-written
Article is factually accurate and verifiable
Article addresses main aspects of topic without going into unnecessary detail
Article is neutral and unbiased
Article is stable
Article contains suitable images

--Tea with toast (talk) 01:18, 15 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]