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In the reception section, these sentences seem broken

they also under pressure to succeed. retrospectively suggested that he should have known that the album would do poorly when he felt no passion for it.

The first portion needs a verb; the second needs a capital letter. Who suggested the lack of passion? Chris857 (talk) 03:24, 10 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]