Talk:Price–Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act/moderated/Archive 2

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One more time... (signal to noise ratio adjustment)

Ed asked that we go line-by-line, in keeping with my suggestion. I'd like to get back to that discussion, please. · Katefan0(scribble) 04:00, July 15, 2005 (UTC)

The Price-Anderson Act is a United States law which limits liability for nuclear plant operators.

Benjamin, are you going to continue to disagree that PAA is a law? I scanned your above comments but they were not constrained to this sentence. You keep trying to make suggestions for the entire opening paragraph, but that's not working. So let's talk about this sentence, please. · Katefan0^(scribble) 14:46, July 15, 2005 (UTC)

From your above comments, you said:

To Say an Act is a Law, strikes me as either redundant or inaccurate. (Benjamin, cut from above)

It's not inaccurate; I've shown you why it's not. How can it be redundant? In fact it's necessary, otherwise people will wonder whether it's been enacted, or simply a bill waiting for action. · Katefan0^(scribble) 14:49, July 15, 2005 (UTC)

I have no objection to calling it a law, a bill, a piece of legislation, a framework, or an Act. - i doubt it needs to be called more than one of those in the first sentence. Benjamin Gatti

So then you're fine with the sentence as it is? · Katefan0^(scribble) 15:23, July 15, 2005 (UTC)

I have no objection to calling it a law, a bill, a piece of legislation, a framework, or an Act; However, the first sentence ought to be as complete as possible - and as written it is incomplete. there are 3 parts to Price - 1. Free Ride Federal Insurance 2. Smaller Pool by government run Insurance 3. Limit the state and the people's right to democratically participate in holding bad actors responsible for the harm they cause. - The first sentence is the most important and it needs to hit each of those three - plus scope (US - nuclear reactors) - a short-cut version is POV by Selection. Benjamin Gatti

We can talk about things to add in later. What we're all trying to do is get something down we can agree with, then modify slowly. Do you agree with the sentence above or not? Yes or no. · Katefan0^(scribble) 17:00, July 15, 2005 (UTC)

I don't agree that its NPOV neutral because it violates NPOV by selection - that is it asserts facts, but the facts it asserts vs the complete set of facts is not neutral - nor is it complete. I think its fine for some sentences later to be incomplete in an of themselves, but the standard ought to be very high for the first sentence. What is your own words, is wrong with the first sentence which I have proposed?

"The Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act (1957) provides Federal Indemnity for private nuclear reactor operators against catastrophic nuclear accidents in the United States. Benjamin Gatti

Regretting taking this on yet, Ed? :) --Woohookitty 20:28, 15 July 2005 (UTC)

No, this is good stuff. Once we get this first sentence, the rest is gravy. Did you ever read Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance? There's a part in there about a girl who overcame writer's block. It was simply awesome. Uncle Ed 21:46, July 15, 2005 (UTC)

That's what you think. :) --Woohookitty 22:16, 15 July 2005 (UTC)

As I said, all we're doing is trying to find a base of agreement from which to build. Do you agree with the sentence? Of course it's incomplete. It's just a starting point. We can discuss things to add once we can agree on this very basic sentence. I'm going to assume since you haven't stated any problems specifically with that sentence that you don't have a problem with anything the sentence asserts. · Katefan0^(scribble) 21:04, July 15, 2005 (UTC)

Blend of yours and mine

"The Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act is a law passed in 1957 which provides Federal Indemnity and limits liability for private nuclear reactor operators against catastrophic nuclear incidents in the United States.

The problems with the above, again, are that (1) it ignores the industry's contributions, (2) the law affects more than just private nuclear reactor operators, and (3) it covers far more than just catastrophic events. This version ignores most of Price-Anderson in a rush to push a pov about catastrophic accidents. Simesa 00:55, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Do you mean potential contributions? The Law was meant to create the private nuclear industry - anything else it covers is ancillary - I suggest. The risk was always the catastrophic event - that is why GE said they wouldn't touch it with a ten foot pole. It'd be like building a moat - and then saying it was to keep the ants out. The purpose of a moat is defend oneself against a catastrophic event. Benjamin Gatti

Hello, everybody?

How's everybody doing? Relaxed and happy? Uptight and be-bothered?

Here's a factoid I googled, trying to find an opening sentence:

The Price-Anderson Act - signed into law in 1957 as an amendment to the Atomic Energy Act of 1954 - provides for payment of public liability claims in the event of a nuclear incident. [1]

And don't forget to check out the latest version of the article, er, sub-mini-stub ;-) at Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act/moderated. Uncle Ed 21:52, July 15, 2005 (UTC)

• The Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act is a United States law passed in 1957 which affects all nuclear facilities in the United States.

Ben, why does the first sentence have to be as complete as possible? Can't it simply be as acceptable as possible? I put up a version (hope that's not cheating!) which is as bland as pablum, but at least has the virtue of being indisputably true. Uncle Ed 21:56, July 15, 2005 (UTC)

I find the factoid accurate and Uncle Ed's version acceptable. Simesa 00:49, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

We're not in mediation to avoid Pablum, so I agree not to object - unless the purpose of bland is to hide the unpleasant truth that the act is. and that without it the nuclear energy industry isn't. The Act as written addresses "Reactors" and it does not apply - according to Simesa - to all reactors or facilities because the Navy isn't covered. It has only the virtue of being wrong about facts which don't matter. I wouldn't call that a ringing endorsement - and I object to the watering down of the article. How about another option - use all the pablum one wants in the second sentence on - but convey the full force and meaning of the Act in the opening sentence. The goo dnews is that as the first sentence goes, so goes the rest of the article - if we get this right and fair, the rest is downhill. Benjamin Gatti

Ben, encyclopedias ARE pablum. They ARE watered down. They ARE "dry" and "authoritative". The thing is, you can complain about it until you are blue in the face, but this article is going to end up dry. That's just how encyclopedias work. --Woohookitty 01:37, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

I want to note for the record that I might have written "all" - i'm not sure whether its true or not - Simesa i'd be happy to hear why you think it doesn't cover all, and also to hear what about the weird case, like a tidal wave throws a nuclear sub into a trai carrying nuclear waste - or what about sabatage? an act of war by sabatage - what if the nuclear material is foriegn and smuggled in? What if it was stolen in 1970 from a covered site, and then manufactored into a warhead and used against us in a war? My sence is that the act was intended to cover "the people" affected by an accident - while protecting reactor operators from state laws which (how horrid) dare to hold people financially accountable for putting other people at risk. Benjamin Gatti

What an odd paragraph. A sub hitting a nuclear waste train wouldn't do much [2] but in the event there were radiological effects the public obviously would be covered. Getting the plutonium out of spent nuclear fuel requires a large and heavily shielded facility. Your "sence" is pov. Simesa 03:44, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Reply on Pablum

I would suggest in reply that in addition to being a free stand-in for the now defunct Brittanica, Wikipedia is a social experiment pushing the envelope of free speech - that is allowing all POV's to be heard uncensored. The purpose as I understand it is not merely to come as close to a dead trees edition as possible, but to go farther - to explore, and perhaps to revisit the most challenging problems of publication by applying the awesome paradigm of collective reasoning. Perhaps some fail to understand that aspect of the Wiki, and expect to find a virtual reincarnation of the news room, with bosses and senior editors making the safe call to please advertisers - that is not this. There is a chaos to collective reasoning (see the stock market for example) but that is the price of its superior results - in short those who are frustrated by the exploration of new social paradigms might feel more comfortable with their shadows on the cave wall. Benjamin Gatti

Ben, that is not what Wikipedia is. Wikipedia is not a large position paper. I'm sick and tired of you inferring that we are censoring you. I know what Wikipedia is, Ben. I know what it stands for. It is not a giant blog. Go here. It says that Wikipedia is not a soapbox. It's not a discussion forum. And by the way, what's with this "collective" jazz? I've yet to see you have a supporter. --Woohookitty 01:42, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Not suggesting its a soapbox, but you'll have to agree the idea of open editorship invites a broader contribution base than a dead-trees project. I'm taking about diverse and politically unpopular points of view having a fair representation. A soapbox is for personal opinions. My contributions lately have been direct quotes - just so i could avoid being accused of orginal research. I would suggest again that watering down is a POV

You have a very odd concept of POV, Ben. Very odd. To you, everything we try to do is POV and everything you do is NPOV no matter what it is. Must be nice. Unless it says "Nukes are bad!!!!!" it is POV to you. I don't see how "watering down" can be POV. What because we don't scream "nukes are awful!" in the first sentence? I don't get it. --Woohookitty 02:50, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Another Blend - full force and meaning

"The Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act is a law passed in 1957 which addresses the risk of catastrophic nuclear incidents by providing Federal Indemnity for nuclear investors, imposing a liability limit on nuclear victims, and by coordinating a pool of insurance for nuclear reactor operators in the United States.

In what way is this opening insufficient? Benjamin Gatti

First, it's too vague in spots ("addresses the risk" -- how? just say it, don't say it "addresses it".) Second, it doesn't impose a liability limit on "nuclear victims," it imposes the liability limit on the nuclear industry. Third, it doesn't "coordinate a pool," the pool wouldn't exist without the PAA, this makes it sound as if the government is just a nice facilitator for something already out there. I continue to believe that "makes available" is the best language in this instance. Come to think of it, the version that's in the article now is much better.

The Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act (commonly called the Price-Anderson Act) limits liability for nuclear plant operators. It also makes available a pool of funds to compensate people who are injured or incur damages from a nuclear or radiological incident. It indemnifies the nuclear industry for accidents, and caps damages that may be rewarded as a result of a lawsuit. Environmental groups, consumer groups and taxpayer watchdogs have criticized the act as a handout to the nuclear power industry. (modified slightly) · Katefan0^(scribble) 03:33, July 16, 2005 (UTC)

I object. We do not need to summarize the entire article in the first sentence. it's unwieldly to say the least. There is no harm in taking a paragraph to say that like they usually do on Wikipedia. --Woohookitty 03:06, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

How about "The Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act is a law regarding nuclear power, which was passed in 1959. The law was designed to address the risk of catastrophic nuclear incidents by providing Federal Indemnity for nuclear investors. In addition, it imposes a liability limit on nuclear victims and also coordinates a pool of insurance for nuclear reactor operators"?

It's more understandable. --Woohookitty 03:09, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

I have the same objections as before. I'll repeat them. (1) It ignores the industry's contributions. (2) The law affects more than just private nuclear reactor operators. (3) It covers far more than just catastrophic events.

Also, in the event of a major accident nuclear investors could only receive at most the $200 million in primary insurance - reactors cost ten times that, and the investors would receive no pool or federal money.

Finally, there's not necessarily a limit on what the injured can receive - in the event the fund is depleted, Congress is required to consider what to do, possibly passing more assessments onto the industry.

A misleading opening paragraph isn't going to fly. Simesa 03:22, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Actually Simesa, I was just trying to come up with something that Ben would be ok with and then go from there. My version isn't meant to be the "final" or anything close. --Woohookitty 03:35, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

"have as a condition of the license a requirement that the licensee have and maintain financial protection of such type and in such amounts as the Nuclear Regulatory Commission" FROM THE ACT - Simesa - it appears nuclear plants are required to "Have and Maintain" thats not a contribution - its a regulation to put something under your pillow.

You say there isn't a limit - but the venue restriction is inherently a limit. Every lawyer knows if you want big damages - you go to state court and get a jury to set the amount. If a nuclear plant pulled a chernobly, the entire organization would be bled dry - the threat of economic ruin is what keeps dangerous companies from getting investors in the first place. It is the free markets way of protecting the public - if the safety system has been disabled - the reader needs to know. Benjamin Gatti

Great Source for Both Sides

"In the United States, safety-related shortcomings have been identified in the construction quality of some plants, plant operation and maintenance, equipment reliability, emergency planning, and other areas. In addition, mishaps have occurred in which key safety systems have been disabled. NRC's oversight of the nuclear industry is an ongoing issue; nuclear utilities often complain that they are subject to overly rigorous and inflexible regulation, but nuclear critics charge that NRC frequently relaxes safety standards when compliance may prove difficult or costly to the industry."

"The consensus among most safety experts is that a severe nuclear power plant accident in the United States is likely to occur less frequently than once every 10,000 reactor-years of operation. These experts believe that most severe accidents would have small public health impacts, and that accidents causing as many as 100 deaths would be much rarer than once every 10,000 reactor-years. On the other hand, some experts challenge the complex calculations that go into predicting such accident frequencies, contending that accidents with serious public health consequences may be more frequent."

Translation: - at current rates, there is expected to be a severe nuclear accident in the United States during our lifetime.

"Nuclear Accident Liability

Liability for damages to the general public from nuclear accidents is controlled by the Price-Anderson Act (primarily Section 170 of the Atomic Energy Act of 1954, 42 U.S.C. 2210). The act is up for reauthorization on August 1, 2002, but existing nuclear plants will continue to operate under the current Price-Anderson liability system if no extension is enacted.

Under Price-Anderson, the owners of commercial reactors must assume all liability for accident damages to the public. To pay any such damages, each licensed reactor must carry the maximum liability insurance available, currently $200 million. Any damages exceeding that amount are to be assessed equally against all operating commercial reactors, up to $83.9 million per reactor. Those assessments - called "retrospective premiums" - would be paid at an annual rate of no more than $10 million per reactor, to limit the potential financial burden on reactor owners following a major accident. Including three that are not operating, 106 commercial reactors are currently covered by Price-Anderson.

For each accident, therefore, the Price-Anderson liability system currently would provide up to $9.09 billion in public compensation. That total includes the $200 million in insurance coverage carried by the reactor that had the accident, plus the $83.9 million in retrospective premiums from each of the 106 currently covered reactors. On top of those payments, a 5% surcharge may also be imposed. Under Price-Anderson, the nuclear industry's liability for an accident is capped at that amount, which varies depending on the number of licensed reactors, the amount of available insurance, and an inflation adjustment that is made every five years. Payment of any damages above that liability limit would require congressional action. "

[3] Benjamin Gatti

So what's wrong with "Liability for damages to the general public from nuclear accidents is controlled by the Price-Anderson Act (primarily Section 170 of the Atomic Energy Act of 1954, 42 U.S.C. 2210)." as an opening line? Simesa 02:58, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Another Try

"The Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act is a law passed in 1957 which permits nuclear reactor operators in the United States to avoid the liability laws established by the states, provides a Federal Indemnity subsidy for nuclear investors, and creates a small pool of insurance for nuclear reactor operators in place of full operator liability.

Benjamin Gatti

Worse than before. Pure propaganda. Simesa 05:10, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Yes, the word "avoid" is very POV here. It has to be neutral or "watered down" as Ben says. --Woohookitty 05:23, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

You have to be kidding.

How about this version -- remember this one? The Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act (commonly called the Price-Anderson Act) limits liability for nuclear plant operators. It also makes available a pool of funds to compensate people who are injured or incur damages from a nuclear or radiological incident. It indemnifies the nuclear industry for accidents, and caps damages that may be rewarded as a result of a lawsuit. Environmental groups, consumer groups and taxpayer watchdogs have criticized the act as a handout to the nuclear power industry. (modified slightly) · Katefan0^(scribble) 05:25, July 16, 2005 (UTC)

I'll go with Katefan0's version. Simesa 10:51, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

from liability in excess of the level of financial protection

"(c) Indemnification of licenses by Nuclear Regulatory Commission The Commission shall, with respect to licenses issued between August 30, 1954, and August 1, 2002, for which it requires financial protection of less than $560,000,000, agree to indemnify and hold harmless the licensee and other persons indemnified, as their interest may appear, from public liability arising from nuclear incidents which is in excess of the level of financial protection required of the licensee. " FROM THE ACT

[4]

I would call $100,000,000 of damages a catastrophy - does Simesa want to claim that the act is not focused on large claims, or that 100M is still a small claim? Benjamin Gatti

Since reactors carry $200 million of primary insurance, according to catastrophe $100 million of claims might be a disaster but wouldn't be a catastrophe. Since Three Mile Island injured no one but resulted in $71 million in claims, yes I'd say $100 million in claims could be a small amount. Simesa 05:03, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Absurd Example of Watering Down

"The Holocaust was an event in Germany in the 1940's which required very precise train schedules."

To show that scrubbing facts can push a profound bias. Benjamin Gatti

You cannot be serious. I don't see a single fact missing from this first sentence. Not a one. "Considerably less" and such are not facts. What you consider "facts" are often opinion, such as your attempt at writing for the enemy. I hope you feel proud for cheapening the Holocaust to serve your needs. --Woohookitty 03:05, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

For the people affected by nuclear power accidents - which price anderson encourages - the horror is quite similar. Nuclear is the stuff the next Holocaust is made of. It does not cheapen the victims of one genocide to oppose another. Keep in mind a generation of children were terminated to avoid the malformation affects of chernobly - victims which are not even listed in the tally. Benjamin Gatti

I'm not going to respond to that. It's pointless responding to your diatribes. So I'll get back to the issue of this article.

What you believe as facts are actually your opinion. The "fact" that the money is considerably less than what Chernobyl cost is your opinion. You have no way of knowing how much a nuclear accident here would cost and none of the sites you cite do either. The "fact" that Price-Anderson supposedly encourages accidents is your opinion. It is not fact. The "fact" that Price-Anderson supposedly helps to avoid all liabilities is your opinion. But you want to include these in the first sentence or the first paragraph and if they aren't in there, then we are "watering down" the article. I hate to tell you this, Ben, but 6,000,000 Jews dying in the Holocaust is a fact. What we have proposed as the first sentence doesn't leave out any real facts whatsoever. What it does leave out is opinion.

Wikipedia is NOT an opinion journal, even though from what you said earlier, you think it is. It's not a place where everyone puts their opinions into the articles. What I don't like about Wikipedia is that there is no way to avoid bad actors like yourself who don't really want what's best for Wikipedia. You want what's best for whatever you believe in and you will keep gaming the system until you've reached your goal. And now, I'm going to ignore any more of your diatribes. Stick to the article itself and we'll be cool.

And one more thing Ben. You say that Wikipedia is here for everyone to express their own viewpoints. But it's not. If that was the case, we'd keep all posts of vandals. We'd never delete a page. We'd never rewrite pages. Frankly, if you consider what we are going "censorship", then you would consider most of Wikipedia "censorship". But wait, I misspeak. You haven't seen the rest of Wikipedia. Pardon me. --Woohookitty 05:51, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

1. "The "fact" that the money is considerably less than what Chernobyl cost is your opinion." No actually it is quite well established that 9.8 Billion is substantially less that 250 Billion. The estimated cost of chernobly is hardly my opinion - the relationship is simple math.
2. "The "fact" that Price-Anderson supposedly helps to avoid all liabilities is your opinion." No - that is the opinnion of groups whose opinions I have cited - CATO Greenpeace etc. Avoiding "All" liability is a stretch - rather it fixes liability as an unreasonably low figure.
3. Millions were affected by chernobyl - depression has increased in an entire region as a result, children were aborted (perhaps no count is available).
4. I did not say that Wikipedia is a place for every persons opinion, but it is a place for substantial viewpoints - and thats the nuance which is missing here. Perhaps only your Point of view should be represented - perhaps only THE GOVERNMENTS point of view? The essence of the first amendment - without which of course wiki wouldn't exist is precisely that the government doesn't get to control the message - that is my point regardless of how you intend to distort it.
5. I'm going to ask you in this context to follow the rules of mediation which indicate no personal attacks - calling me a bad actor shows a lack of good faith on your part and undermines the process - i'll ask to have you removed from this process if it continues.

Benjamin Gatti

Personal remarks

Let's all try to avoid personal remarks such as those I struck out above:

• I hope you feel proud for cheapening the Holocaust to serve your needs.
• It's pointless responding to your diatribes.
• What you believe as facts are actually your opinion.
• You cannot be serious.

Each of you will recognize your own, er, handwriting here. You'll also notice that I picked precisely two examples from each person. I am not accusing anyone of violating policy, but I'm saying that remarks such as these distract us from the task at hand.

Let's stick to discussing the article. Uncle Ed 16:02, July 16, 2005 (UTC)

First Paragraph

Ben's proposed first sentence was placed in the article, and objections asked for. I object. This morning I replaced it with Katefan0's proposed first paragraph which I, Katefan0 and I believe Woohookitty support. Any deficiencies in it can be dealt with in the body of the article. Simesa 16:59, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Kate's Points of Disagreement

I feel this reply by Kate touches the heart of the problem: I had proposed: "The Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act is a law passed in 1957 which addresses the risk of catastrophic nuclear incidents by providing Federal Indemnity for nuclear investors, imposing a liability limit on nuclear victims, and by coordinating a pool of insurance for nuclear reactor operators in the United States.

To which Kate replies:

1. "First, it's too vague in spots ("addresses the risk" -- how? just say it, don't say it "addresses it".)

There really are three "How's" - ther are listed. Addressing the Risk is probably the truist description of the act - the risks were not addressed in the Atomic Act of 1955 and as a consequence - no movement to build. GE came to congress and said "Address the risk" - and this is how they did it.

1. Second, it doesn't impose a liability limit on "nuclear victims," it imposes the liability limit on the nuclear industry.

Here you're simply dead wrong. The limit is imposed on victims. You're hurt? - sorry You Mrs. Victim CANNOT go after the people responsible because they are "special" they have federal protection - instead you can have this fixed sum of taxpayer (your) money.

1. Third, it doesn't "coordinate a pool," the pool wouldn't exist without the PAA, this makes it sound as if the government is just a nice facilitator for something already out there.

Well it pretty much is. The something out there is the highest private insurance availble in 1957 - about 1M - but the government coordinates this insurance by making each nuclear plant "responsible" for any accident at any other plant.

1. I continue to believe that "makes available" is the best language in this instance.

The Government isn't doing the "making" - it's organizing - or taking it from the taxpayer.

Benjamin Gatti

Following Suit

Since Simesa Replaced the Moderated Version with his own version, I took the liberty of modifying here and there. For the most part the facts are the same, but the qualifyiers tend to hide the effect. Price has a dramatic effect - it suspends state safety laws, it makes a nuclear accident far more likely to occur by encouraging reckless engineering, it imposes risk on taxpayers while providing profits for rich investors. If every industry was run that way - there would be no differnce between the US and The USSR. Car safety has improved impressively in the last 40 years - why? because people injured by a bad design sue the Crap out of the engineering firm - tough - but that's the cost of improvement - everyone else sees the award and says - we need to make sure our design is safe. In the Nuclear field, that has been defeated by Price. a nuclear accident would not result in similar lawsuits, and so the engineers have the luxury of passing on the dangers of their design to Joe Taxpayer/Victim. Hence the term "Deadbeat" - nuclear engineers don't want to pay the cost imposed by the risks they take - they want society to pay those costs instead - a spade is a spade. Benjamin Gatti

I reverted it back to Ed's version from yesterday since it's obvious that Ben objects to Simesa's version. --Woohookitty 19:13, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Well now I put the 2 versions side by side. --Woohookitty 19:46, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Let's go easy on the reversions. The thing is to make a "text move" and then discuss the disputed text. Think about "mom and apple pie". (sorry, spacing out, I mean we need to think about making a clear unbiased presentation). Uncle Ed 20:02, July 16, 2005 (UTC)

Actually, car safety and reliability has increased due to competition. This is also happening in the nuclear field - the new ABWRs are approximately 100 times safer than previous BWRs (due largely to putting the recirculation system inside the reactor vessel). Also, passively-safe designs such as the ESBWR and AP-1000 are now available. Finally, inherently-safe designs such as the pebble bed modular reactor are under research. Your pov is again wrong. Simesa 23:27, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Wikipedia:Text move

I would like to define a "text move" as:

1. cutting a disputed passage of text from an article; and,
2. pasting the text into the article's talk page

Please do not revert any changes to Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act/moderated. Just do text moves. Can we all agree to this? Uncle Ed 20:31, July 16, 2005 (UTC)

Imagine you're a victim of Chernobyl

Or the equivelent in the US.

Now image you read these two introduction to Price. One is pablum - the other actually informs the reader as to the exitence of a danger which is too great for industry to accept on its own, and it warns the reader that they are - out of luck - in the event of a disaster, and it has that - you've been warned - quality. The other is simply says nothing except rehease the governments doublespeak that "a pool of funds have been created" which sounds like reponsability = when its exactly the opposite. Benjamin Gatti

Ben, we're not giving in. I wish you'd just compromise. We're not giving in to making this an opionated article. We need to come to a middle ground or else you're not going to get anything you want in the article. --Woohookitty 20:43, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Archiving

"This page is 57 kilobytes long. This may be longer than is preferable; see article size." Anyone want to help archive? Uncle Ed 20:37, July 16, 2005 (UTC)

I archived it a bit. --Woohookitty 20:49, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

Real issues

What are the real issues?

1. It's unfair that nuclear power gets a subsidy, while coal and oil and non-burning methods have to struggle along in the marketplace.
2. Price-Anderson will lead to a holocaust, like Chernobyl only maybe worse: killing millions of people.

I'm just guessing. Why do I have to guess? Can't you guys just come and out and tell me point blank? I'm going to demand an increase in my pay if you don't start helping me to help you! :-(

Yes, I'm ticked. I want double pay ;-) or else you guys have to start doing what I say. Uncle Ed 20:41, July 16, 2005 (UTC)

Both things you listed are Ben's argument. Simesa and Katefan0 do the arguments on our side, so I'm just pointing that out. --Woohookitty 20:51, 16 July 2005 (UTC)

I came here because of an RFC. Benjamin has been, primarily, the one seeking changes. I have generally been involved mostly in making sure the changes he wants are NPOV. The version as it is now (on the protected page), as far as I'm concerned, is relatively fine. The criticisms section is a little bloated but that can be fixed fairly easily, and I think the way the pool works needs a better explainer (that's what I was working on when the page was protected). Beyond some other minor things, that's about it. · Katefan0^(scribble) 20:55, July 16, 2005 (UTC)

Sounds like it's S+K+W vs. B. The three of youse want to keep it mostly the same (with more clarity re: the pool) while Ben wants to add some significant points? Who agrees with this? (sign below or something, while I go increase my stress meter - see user:Ed Poor). Uncle Ed 21:12, July 16, 2005 (UTC)

Ben - Humbly Suggesting a series of points on which we disagree:

1. Whether the wiki will assert the opinions of government officials as fact or couched for what they are.
2. Whether the wiki asserts that the "pool" is bigger, smaller, created, or reduced.
3. Whether or not the wiki will speculate on the scale of future nuclear accidents with authority.

That's it. I reject the notion that this is a lopsided debate in any sence other than a personal one. as far as facts are concerned, Kate has added copious facts with which I wholeheartedly agree. The truth is that the line of agreement has been moving in the direction that I would call neutral - that is in which my points are well represented. Benjamin Gatti

Just to clarify for Ed's sake: I helped Benjamin add most of the "criticisms" section, because he didn't seem to quite get how to properly source or attribute opinions on WP. I was trying to be helpful, but they shouldn't be construed as my own preferences. (Indeed, I think it's too much.) · Katefan0^(scribble) 01:11, July 17, 2005 (UTC)

Thanks. Here's my take:

1. The article could truthfully and accurately state that this or that government official has said X about Price-Anderson.
   • ...while refusing to speculate on whether X is "really true" or not.
2. The article could describe the pool in terms of what various officials, politicians, pressure groups, etc." say it is:
   • Official F says it's too big, politician M says it's too small, and Group B says it's just right.
3. The article can report on what the various speculations are:
   • Scientist H says the next accidet will be a "mega-holocaust"
   • Industry spokesman P says the next accident will be a "mini-Three Mile Island".

In other words, just give the range of opinion, ducking all conclusions. No bias, just unvarnished neutrality. Uncle Ed 22:12, July 16, 2005 (UTC)

Of Course, and as you'll see by my request for Mediation - that is exactly what I believe is consistent with wiki policy. Thank you for clarifying Wiki Policy - I would be surprised is any subject we're as important and as tricky as this one - in short this I think is the case for which NPOV was written. If the people of Belarus and Kiev has access to free speech, Chernobly might never have happpened. Benjamin Gatti

The three key issues as I see them are:

1. Ben insists on inserting uncited pov statements: "Price Anderson makes it possible for a nuclear accident, such as Chernobyl, to occur in the United States by suspending the safety laws of all fifty states." for example.
2. Ben rejects government statements not favorable to the points he wants to push - for example, besides Katefan0's sources on the genesis of PAA, I have a cite from the NRC (as well as four others) as to why an accident in the US would be less severe than Chernobyl, and Ben is dead-set against allowing them in (he has come up with none to the contrary). I submit that if it is okay to name Greenpeace as a source, then it must be okay to name the CRS, GAO and NRC as sources.
3. Ben for some reason doesn't want it mentioned in the article that the Department of Energy operates reactors, fuel enrichment plants and other nuclear-related facilities, and that they and the contractors running them are covered by Price-Anderson.

Ben admits he is in the wave energy business and wants the nuclear industry closed down so that subsidies will be forced into that business. (The rest of us have no contact with the energy industries.) He isn't satisfied with an article that has 7 paragraphs of criticisms (not counting criticisms in other paragraphs) to 6 for the rest of the article.

Simesa 00:17, 17 July 2005 (UTC)

Unlike Simesa who has and expects to receive Nuclear money (Social Security deferrments, retirement etc) Ben hasn't been paid a dime by any energy industry. As a researcher, he believes renewable energy is adequate and less expensive than nuclear. More importantly, he belives that renewable energy is more egalitarian and democratic as it removes power from a few, and gives it to many - and everywhere - rather than only a few powerful states. I'm not shy about my POV, and I'm pretty clear that the Wiki shouldn't express it - but neither should it present any other POV in the first voice.

What part of that is not factual - Supreme court say it suspended laws - said it was better and necessary. Clearly it trumps state liability laws (safety laws in common words), without it, a nuclear accident couldn't happen in the US - because of Price Anderson, GE and Westinghouse can take a risk on a chernobly - otherwise they wouldn't - we have sourcs on that - so yes, it could be stated and couched - but I doubt you can deny the facts therein.

No - i only ask that they be couched - same as you require of my assertions.

Specifically i object to the statement "Price doesn't cover the Navy - which never had an accident." because it seems more irrelevent than relevent and only there to push the POV - see - its safe. By all means a comprehensive sense of what IS covered would be a good idea.

Again, i don't think nuclear deserve 96% of energy subsidies, nor is it the cheapest solution in a zero subsidy world.

Benjamin Gatti

Question for Ed

I have a question for you, Ed. This is something I've asked Ben but he's never responded. Do you know of any other article on Wikipedia that does not treat government statements as to why a law was created as authoritative? Because that's what Ben is trying to do here. I know that our discussion has been hard to follow at times, but his main point is that government sources should not be treated as authoritative in terms of describing why this law was passed in the first place.

It's really the major point of contention here. He sees the government sources as being POV, even when it comes to non-partisan sources like the GAO. I've yet to find an article that treats a government source by saying "The GAO said...". In other articles, the government voice is treated as authoritative. I know you said up above that we should state things as "that this or that government official has said about Price-Anderson". Well we're not talking about a biased government official in the present. We're talking about GAO reports...Katefan has some experience in this and she has said that the GAO is never criticized as being anything but neutral. Ever. By Democrats, Republicans...anyone. And yet Ben keeps arguing that the GAO and other non partisan sources should be treated as "POV" when they aren't treated as POV by any other article I've ever seen. And I'm just wondering if you've ever seen an article that treats the GAO or any such non-partisan group as POV.

In the end, to me, this is our #1 issue and if we can get past it, I think the rest will be easier. So that's why I'm just asking if you have anything to say about it. --Woohookitty 09:21, 17 July 2005 (UTC)

Actually, yes, I've seen several articles like that. Much as I love government (grin), it's not always correct. Even a nonpartisan pronouncement can represent a point of view which hides something or just fails to recognize something. The classic examples are both political and ecclesiastical: the Roman governor's decision to punish Jesus, and the Inquisition's decision to make pioneer scientist Galileo Galilei recant his views on the mobility of the earth.

I assume you want more recent examples, but I hesitate to supply them. Let's do a thought experiment instead.

Tell me, which government's statements do you consider to be authoritative? Next, what do we at Wikipedia do when we find two different governments with clashing opinions? Declare them both right? (I can think of several cases where a certain, er, Western Hemisphere government disagrees with several European governments on a major matter similar in character to nuclear power disaster compensation. Must I spell it out?) Uncle Ed 11:27, July 17, 2005 (UTC)

Proposal of Evening of July 16

Uncle Ed proposed:

"The Price-Anderson Nuclear Industries Indemnity Act has been criticized by environmental groups, consumer groups and taxpayer watchdogs as a handout to the nuclear power industry."

"The act regulates financial compensation for victims of nuclear power plant accidents. While guarenteeing a certain minimum level of compensation, through a "pool" system, it drastically limits maximum levels of compensation. even when a plant operator is found criminally negligent."

I have a number of problems with this proposal.

1. We start by criticizing something that hasn't even been explained - this sentence belongs at the end of these sentences.
2. The Act covers more than nuclear power plant accidents - it also covers radiological injuries from transportation, at enrichment plants, mishaps at several other DOE facilities, etc.
3. "guarenteeing a certain minimum level of compensation" isn't correct - it guarantees a maximum pool amount, and requires Congress to consider acting if that is exceeded.
4. "drastically" is definitely pov.
5. I suggest "even if" instead of "even when", as I've seen no cites as to this ever happening under PAA.

Simesa 03:10, 17 July 2005 (UTC)

1. Now that the shoe is on the other foot - expect the same complaints - "I want my POV first." - but I do agree - its silly.
2. The Act covers incidents not accidents - terrorist is not an accident. - presuambly involving radioactive material.
3. The Act replaces standard liability with federal indemnity - making the taxpayer liable for damages caused by nuclear reactors even IF they are criminally negligent.
4. is "reduces" neutral as in it reduces the level of compensation and holds operators harmless even IF ...

Benjamin Gatti

I completely object to the version proposed. Way way too many POV words in the version proposed. We have "criticized" in the very first sentence and then we have "drastically". The last sentence is very POV. Ed, why can't we both put up what we propose for our complete versions and then look at the differences between the two? This line by line approach is going to take us months and I'm not exagerating here. Just doing basically 2 sentences has taken us about a week. And also...don't take this as a criticism because it's not...but I don't think you quite understand the major issues involved and where we differ. I know it's our fault because we've done way too much free form discussion, but maybe putting our complete versions side by side will show you the differences. --Woohookitty 04:52, 17 July 2005 (UTC)

Struck some of my comments. I made them before I had fully read all of the responses and posts today. I duly apologize. --Woohookitty 09:10, 17 July 2005 (UTC)

I agree with S-1, S-2, S-5, and B-2. But I gotta go now. c u Uncle Ed 12:22, July 17, 2005 (UTC)

Conflict of Interest

Ed has asked me to respond to the accusation that I (Ben) have a vested interest and cannot therefore be neutral. If you visit my talk page you will see 2 items, My interest in solving the energy problem (which is to say the world peace problem) without destroying the environment, and 2. that I have been arrested for picking up litter - actually for encouraging minors to pick up (advertising) litter. I am not afraid to act against accepted norms when those norms are immoral. In addition my wife's family has received the Chernobly Liquidator Award - and in a very real sence, my own daughter (3) was exposed to the radiation of Chernobyl.

"To participator of the liquidation of consequence of accident on Chernobyl Nuclear Electric Station"

Technically, I am not in the business, though I would hope to be. But more important, my objection to the 93% subsidies which nuclear gets is that nuclear energy for all that is still more expensive than wind - imposes a security threat - and cannot be used to solve the wider world problem because of proliferation and scarce resources. It is estimated that we have 30 years of uranium reserves. If the Chinese install 100 reactors, that goes to 20, if we install 100 more it goes to 15 - what are we going to do with half-used nuclear reactors? who will pay for the decomissioning? Who is decomissioning the plants now? Did you know it takes longer to decomission a nuclear plant than to build it AND RUN IT? (10+40) useful life vs. 100+years for decomissioning. Ed, I think an honest evaluation shows that everyone has a vested interest at ~ $1000 a month as a household energy budget (Includes energy in food, goods consumed and depreciated, services rendered, transportation, etc...) So my vested interest is not paranormal. Simesa on the other hand was employed by the nuclear industry - and wants the wiki to assert that a nuclear accident in the US would be on a smaller scale than chernobyl. I think Katefan has an interest in her pet topic - do we exclude everyone from having a fair stake as soon as we indentify a potential conflict? I doubt it - the Supreme court addressed this issue years ago and observed that only people with some stake and going to pursue the ends of justice, and so they should not be descriminated against for that reason. - I hope that helps answer the question. MyWebsite Benjamin Gatti

I'm not sure why Benjamin feels it's okay to misrepresent my position, but I've said numerous times that I came here as a result of a Request for Comments posted presumably by Simesa. WP:RFC My personal interest in this topic is marginal at best; I came here to help resolve the conflict between Benjamin and Simesa. · Katefan0^(scribble) 15:48, July 17, 2005 (UTC)

In case it wasn't clear, I only suggested that "Kate" - "Fan" has an interest in her pet topic (Katherine Hepburn) - I much prefer her sister, but that's another story. What is relevent is that everyone comes into the world with a bias, and that we have to find neutrality in spite of our biases, and not start disqualifying individuals because of them. Benjamin Gatti

This is obviously off topic, but if I don't correct this, Kate won't forgive me. :) Katharine Hepburn and Audrey Hepburn are not related. I'm hoping you were just being facetious. :) --Woohookitty 19:14, 17 July 2005 (UTC)

As usual, Ben's sources get their facts wrong. The Shippingport Reactor was cleared to a unrestricted brownfield in 5 years [5]. There's plenty of uranium [6], and even if there weren't there's far more thorium. And I have detailed cites for my desired assertion. Simesa 05:13, 18 July 2005 (UTC)