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Reviewer: StoryKai (talk · contribs) 02:14, 5 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]


I will review this article.StoryKai (talk) 02:14, 5 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

This was a short, but interesting article.


However, I believe that the introduction is a summary and all its information should also be in the article itself. In the section entitled "Biography", include his birth date and death date. Don't bother with citations in the introduction. Just move the citations about his birth and death from the introduction to the "Biography section". Also, was he born in 1635 or 1637, because I see both dates.


--"VIII lord of Benetússer and V baron of Dos Aguas"=Change this to "Eighth Lord of Benetússer and Fifth Baron of Dos Aguas".


--"entrenchements"=The word is spelled, "entrenchments".


--"Unfortunately, in the following year the commanding knight of Langon"=The word "unfortunately" is biased and should be deleted.


--"Commanding knight of Avernes de Bocag"="commanding" should not be capitalized. — Preceding unsigned comment added by StoryKai (talkcontribs) 01:43, 20 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]