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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Readville (MBTA station)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Rcsprinter123 (talk · contribs) 15:10, 7 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I will be reviewing this article. My strategy is to give overall comments about the article, then go through it section by section, check all the references, and finally to check it against the Good Article criteria. I'll let the nominator know when I'm ready for their response. Rcsprinter123 (collogue) 15:10, 7 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

General comments

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This article has some substance, while not being overly long, with a good number of photographs and references. It follows the standard format for MBTA station articles, including only three sections of layout, history and bus connections plus a short lead. There's a few external links, although no further reading or suchlike. Checklinks reports a lone dead link, which I'm sure can be fixed, and there are no ambiguous links, either. Daily traffic is around 13 views per day, so while not exactly the highest traffic, still worthy of being high quality for those that do read it.

Section analysis

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After the review has been conducted, editors addressing the article may mark individual points below off by placing {{done}} after the item.

Lead

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Station layout

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History

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  • As above, should be the first section.
  • Why is the station called Readville? It's located in Hyde Park, right?
  • The Norfolk County passed into the Boston, Hartford and Erie Railroad isn't very clear. Would suggest "The Norfolk County Railroad became the Boston..."
  • Can you say why it was known as Blue Hills and why it was changed in 1888?
  • What is the upper level at Wolcott Square?
  • The two-story station building burned in June 1983. Burned down, surely. Any cause of fire given? Was it subsequently demolished?
  • "handicapped-accessible" doesn't seem to read right. Maybe lose the middle "ped", and introduce some continuity in terms of en dashes between the uses in the MBTA era and Proposed Orange Line extension subsections
    •  Partly done Proper use is somewhat inconsistent, but best practice seems to be "handicapped-accessible" when preceding a noun and "handicapped accessible" when starting alone. I've made this usage consistent across the article. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 20:25, 10 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • The design contract was awarded in 2012, and a construction contract will be awarded in 2015. Outdated. Needs rewriting (and sourcing) to reflect more recent events.
    •  Not done I changed the wording, but no further information is available. The MBTA is (since early this year) controlled by a extremely conservative fiscal board due to political pressures, so a number of line item contracts like this one have been very slow to be awarded with no available information about their status. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 04:16, 10 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • The extension is still periodically discussed. - by whom? where, how, why? More citations..

Bus connections

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No other issues

References

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The number of each reference I give is correct as of revision 694170599; if any have been added since then it will have moved numbers.

If there is no comment on a reference assume I have reviewed it and found no problems.

  • Ref 1 can't give 2013 daily inbound averages because it was published in 2010. It doesn't mention the figures 365 or 256 for Readville within it. Needs changing to a better (and more up to date) source (but can keep it for the claim of "maintenance facility and layover yard")
  • Refs 3, 12, 14, 15 and 20 are not very explicit, as it requires studying of the map to see what it's trying to prove. Any better sources? Otherwise, it'll do
    •  Not done Unfortunately, that's the best I have without delving into OR. Further historical sources with more focused details may pop up later while I'm looking up something completely different - there are a number of old Railroad Commissioners reports which are poorly searchable. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 20:25, 10 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 5 doesn't mention the storage of railroad-related materials or anything to do with November 11, 1987. Just take it out of there
  • Ref 16 mentions January 27, 1973 as the date "MBTA acquired most of the Penn Central commuter rail right of way". However, the article says January 23. Which is correct?

If you can put a tick after or strike through any items which have been addressed that would be useful. Rcsprinter123 (converse) 16:10, 7 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Rcsprinter123: I believe I've now fixed all the fixable problems you brought up. There's still a few remaining - mostly because some historical data is very hard to come by - but I hope the article is now GA quality. Thanks, Pi.1415926535 (talk) 20:43, 10 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for making the changes in such a timely way. I'll check through the GA criteria tomorrow to see if the article's up to standard. Rcsprinter123 (talk) 21:47, 10 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Checklist

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Congratulations. I'll promote to GA now. Rcsprinter123 (message) 20:32, 11 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Awesome! Thank you for all your help! Pi.1415926535 (talk) 21:27, 11 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]