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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Riddler's Revenge/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 15:49, 14 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • Many other of these articles have the name of the ride in italics, why does this start differently?
  • "located at... located in" is repetitive.
  • Link "inversions" the first time round in the lead.
  • "approximately 3 minutes." -> three.
  • "eleventh roller coaster[1] on April 4, 1998,[2]" for the sake of better looking prose, put ref [1] after the 1998,
  • "which opened exactly one year prior.[9] The opening of " repetitive.
  • "on the 3 minute" three-minute.
  • Put page numbers in the PDF refs, along with format=pdf.

I'll put it on-hold for a week or so while these minor issues are addressed. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:26, 28 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man:  Done Themeparkgc  Talk  04:13, 29 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Should the title of the article therefore be The Riddler's Revenge not just Riddler's Revenge as you currently have it? The Rambling Man (talk) 08:03, 29 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: Yes. I just tried to move it myself but there is a redirect in the way. As you are an administrator, would you mind moving it? Otherwise I'll just tag it with {{db-move}}. Themeparkgc  Talk  08:43, 29 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I've done that move, I'll take one final look at the article shortly. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:58, 29 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]