Talk:Star Trek: Enterprise season 2/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:16, 6 May 2015 (UTC)
Enterprise is the only series I haven't watched but I'll be happy to review this JAGUAR 22:16, 6 May 2015 (UTC)
Initial comments[edit]
- The lead summarises the article well and I couldn't find any prose issues with it, although I would have questioned the sentence regarding introducing the Romulans into the Star Trek franchise as it sounds like it was their actual first appearence...
- Can a little more be added to the Plot overview section? Did anything significant happen in this season or did it not have a single story-arc?
- LeVar Burton is linked twice in the Episodes section
- "Production on the second season of Enterprise began on June 24, 2004" - but it aired between 2002-2003?
- LeVar Burton playing Geordi LaForge is not mentioned in the Production section whereas Roxanne Dawson is?
- "The season opened with Nielsen rating]s" - typo
- "But the series didn't win any of the awards it was nominated for" - sounds a bit informal, might sound better as However, the series did not win any of the awards it was nominated for
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This is overall a very well written article that almost meets the GA criteria. All of the points I mentioned above were minor and shouldn't take too long to clarify, so this should be good to go once they're addressed. Thanks! JAGUAR 15:27, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks, I just need to add some LeVar Burton stuff - once I have I'll add a further comment here to say it has been done. Miyagawa (talk) 17:52, 8 May 2015 (UTC)
Close - promoted[edit]
Sounds like half of The Next Generation if this season were all bottle shows! I thought about watching Enterprise but I don't think anything can beat the epic-ness of the Dominion War... anyway this article is looking good, the prose is well written and now those minor details have been added it now passes the comprehensiveness part of the criteria. Well done JAGUAR 21:35, 8 May 2015 (UTC)