Talk:Lord Viren/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:32, 16 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:32, 16 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Basic stuff and comments[edit]

Infobox and lead

Don't use WP:SMALLFONT in the infobox.
- Done.
Add alt text to the character's image.
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. I haven't done alt text in a long time, so I hope the description I wrote is good enough. Not sure if I should also mention his race / skin colour. --PanagiotisZois (talk) 15:18, 19 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Use "plainlist" instead of <br>
- Done
Feel free to remove unused parameters.
- Done
The lead is well-written; no issues there.

Other stuff

Add a serial comma after "master of dark magic".
- Done.
Remove the comma after "recognizes the mirror".
- Done.
Remove the comma after "exposes his treachery".
- Done.
"when told is was" - typo?
- My mistake. The sentence is saying that when the friend in question was "told he [Viren] was" practical, he agreed for his name to be used.
"Remove the comma after "retained its layers".
- Done.
Slashfilm → /Film
- Done.
Sources are archived.

Progress[edit]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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