Template:Did you know nominations/Piscadera Bay and Caribbean Marine Biological Institute

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 30 April 2015 (UTC)

Piscadera Bay and Caribbean Marine Biological Institute

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... ~~that until 2002, the Caribbean Marine Biological Institute on Piscadera Bay (pictured) was the largest research station of its kind in the Southern Caribbean?~~

Reviewed: Zamana (volcano) and Ma Xingrui

Created by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Nvvchar (talk), and Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 04:24, 17 April 2015 (UTC).

Approved elements: new enough, long enough, checks for copyvio reveals no problems (e.g. [1]), image is properly licensed.

Problems: 1) ~~A QPQ review has not been performed~~, 2) Content in the hook is not verified in the sources given in the Caribbean Marine Biological Institute or Piscadera Bay articles at the end of the respective sentences with this information. The organization's website (used as a source in both articles with the hook's content) states that it "has remained the largest field station in the Southern Caribbean", which contradicts the notion in the hook of it being so "until 2002". The book source used ([2], also used as a source in both articles with the hook's content) does not verify any pertinent content in the hook. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 06:05, 17 April 2015 (UTC)

Update: QPQ performed. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 12:32, 17 April 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I think I've resolved the wording issue and here's ALT1: ~~... that the Caribbean Marine Biological Institute on Piscadera Bay (pictured) is "the largest field station in the Southern Caribbean"?~~ --Rosiestep (talk) 03:42, 18 April 2015 (UTC)

The article and hook appear to need more adjustment. At this source used to verify content in the hook, it states, "To facilitate ecological research CARMABI, originally short for the Caribbean Marine Biological Institute...". As such, the article's title does not accurately represent the organization's present name, instead using the organization's previous name. On this page it states, "In 1999 CARMABI and STINAPA merged into one organization, the Caribbean Research and Management of Biodiversity Foundation, better known under the original acronym CARMABI." As such, in order to be accurate, it appears that the article should be renamed to Caribbean Research and Management of Biodiversity Foundation, and the hook should be adjusted accordingly. Another option is to rename the article to CARMABI Foundation, which the organization uses on their contact page (link). North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 05:02, 18 April 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. I've made the improvements/clarifications you mention and here's ALT2: ~~... that CARMADI Foundation on Piscadera Bay (pictured) is the "largest field station in the Southern Caribbean"?~~ --Rosiestep (talk) 15:00, 18 April 2015 (UTC)

Here's an ALT, which provides more detail. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 03:04, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

ALT3 ... that the CARMADI Foundation, an ecological research organization on Piscadera Bay (pictured), is the "largest field station in the Southern Caribbean"?

I like ALT3. --Rosiestep (talk) 04:23, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

Good to go with ALT3. North America¹⁰⁰⁰ 04:27, 21 April 2015 (UTC)