Template:Did you know nominations/T.H.E (The Hardest Ever)
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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 00:48, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
T.H.E (The Hardest Ever)
[edit]- ... that when Jimmy Iovine asked will.i.am who he wanted to collaborate with on "T.H.E. (The Hardest Ever)", will mentioned Mick Jagger because he felt it would never happen?
Created/expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nom at 15:05, 21 November 2011 (UTC)
- Hook: Interesting... but even better if we say that he did get to work with Jagger. For example:(ALT1) ... that although will.i.am felt that he could never convince Mick Jagger to collaborate with him for on "T.H.E. (The Hardest Ever)", Jagger did? or something similar.
- I think we should still mention the context.
- (ALT2)... that when Jimmy Iovine asked will.i.am who he wanted to collaborate with on "T.H.E. (The Hardest Ever)", will mentioned Mick Jagger because he felt it would never happen, but Jagger did collaborate?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:03, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
- Article: New as of nomination date, long enough. Referencing is a mess, with four bare URLs. I'm not sure all the twitter references are useful; anything else? Paraphrasing checks (1, 2) seem okay.
- Summary:
Please fix the BURLs. Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:21, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
- BURLs fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 17:58, 1 December 2011 (UTC)
ALT2 good to go! Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:51, 2 December 2011 (UTC)
