User talk:Gigisokay/The West Wind (Gould)/TiaIvy Peer Review
The West Wind (Gould) TiaIvy Peer review response
[edit]Hello TiaIvy,
Thank you for your thoughtful feedback on my writing. It is gratefully appreciated. I will go ahead and fix any changes that you have advised me to fix such as making the first paragraph more shorted and adding more citations to my work. One thing that you have said was when I written "large sum". In some places I have just stopped writing in order to make sure I get accurate information about what I need such as how much the museums has the sculpture for. Thank you again for your well thought-out feedback and I will be sure to make the appropriate changes in no time.
Gigisokay Gigisokay (talk) 19:36, 12 November 2023 (UTC)