User talk:Sschlo1/sandbox

Sources

You're late posting sources to the sandbox. Josef Horáček (talk) 02:28, 21 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

You were supposed to find sources using the library. It shouldn't be too hard to find information related to your chosen article. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:45, 28 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The Lead

Your lead is good. I suggest replacing the last sentence with a mention of his death. Saying that he "made history" doesn't maintain a neutral point of view. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:40, 28 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]