Wikipedia:Peer review/Shiv Chopra/archive1

Shiv Chopra[edit]

I just want an honest opinion on the writing and all on this article because I would like to bring it to the Good Article Status sometime. (Samir contributed more than me on this article although. --Deenoe 15:37, 28 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yannismarou[edit]

The article is well-written and well-citated. The problem is that it does not constitute a thorough biography, but focuses on two particular incidents: the whistleblowing and the racial discrimination. But I'll treat this article like all the other biographies:

Photos are needed. I donot think it would be difficult to find photos related to this article.
When was Chopra born? Very few words about her origins and family are needed.
What are her whereabouts now? This is a biography for a living person; we want to know what she is now doing.
If you expand the article with this information, the lead will also need a slight expansion (WP:LEAD).
The link of East Indian sends me to a disambiguation page. This is wrong. Send me straight wherever you want, because in the disambiguation page I have more than ten links and I do not know which one you want me to choose.

In any case, I believe that the article is not far away from the GA status.--Yannismarou 06:40, 29 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for your comments. For the picture, I am currently in discussino with Shiv Chopra to have a picture that is free of use completly. When I'll talk to him, I'll ask him about his origins and his whereabouts now, even if I think that currently Shiv Chopra is still in a battle with the public service. I'll also correct the fact that the link gets on a disambiguation page.

Thanks again.--Deenoe 10:32, 29 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]