Talk:Fusajiro Yamauchi

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Can anyone find any evidence/citation of his remians being entombed in Nintendo's headquarters? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 24.175.93.30 (talk) 21:46, 24 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

                                                      NINTENDO  — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.200.190.218 (talk) 15:33, 21 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Sources used for GA nomination.[edit]

The following books were read online :

The Story of Nintendo : https://books.google.be/books?id=M-pGHGDm5a4C&redir_esc=y (Google Books)

Game Over, Press Start to Continue: How Nintendo Conquered the World : https://archive.org/details/0966961706/mode/2up Maxime12346

Nintendo: The Company and Its Founders : https://archive.org/details/nintendocompanyi0000fire/mode/2up

(talk) 19:56, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review[edit]

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Nominator: DanganMachin (talk · contribs) 09:51, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: NatwonTSG2 (talk · contribs) 19:52, 6 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @DanganMachin I decided to review this article because it looks pretty simple and easy so. This article seems a handful of fixes to be addressed.

Review[edit]

Lead

For the infobox, not much other than the fact that you're unable find sources for his unnamed daughter and the cause of his death. ~~I think this source might help a bit.~~
In the first sentence, you could change who founded Yamauchi Nintendo, the company now known as Nintendo into who founded Yamauchi Nintendo, later known as Nintendo.

Early life

Shouldn't this section's title be renamed into Early life.
P2: Could this section be one entire paragraph and ~~you could removed the additional reference there.~~

**Yamauchi Fusajirô Shôten or Yamauchi Nintendo**
Location	Problem
P7 S1	removed even because it kinda made the sentence like a direct quote.
P8 S1	unless you're making a direct quote, removed yet again.

Personal details

S1: With no son into Without a son
S4: change claim into claimed

Fixs.[edit]

Thank you for reviewing my article !

Here are the fixs I made :

Lead

According to Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Perennial sources NNDB is a deprecated source and shouldn't be used. So I consider it done.

Sentence Done.

Before Nintendo

Early Life Done.

One paragraph + reference. I have fused the first two paragraphs but I don't see what reference you are talking about. Done.

Personal details

S1 Done.

S4 Done.

DanganMachin (talk) 17:09, 8 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@NatwonTSG2 I have finished to adress the fixs you said the article needed. (: Could you please put the follow-up review in the form of a table if possible ? Thank you for your time. DanganMachin (talk) 17:24, 8 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]