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Declined by Timothytyy 5 months ago. Last edited by Timothytyy 5 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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The Battle of Xiaopei is a battle between the allied forces of Liu Bei and Cao Cao against Gao Shun of Lü Bu's army. Liu Bei, having just turned against Lu Bu was subsequently attacked for his betrayal. In retaliation, Cao Cao sent Xiahou Dun to aid Liu Bei. The battle is not popularized as much as other battles, and very well could be fictional. It was not featured in Luo Guanzhong's novel, Romance of the Three Kingdoms, but is featured in Koei Tecmo's popular game series, Dynasty Warriors, more specifically, Dynasty Warriors 8: Xtreme Legends, in Lu Bu's Musou Mode, or Story Mode. The first paragraph down to the word 'The' is cited from the official Koei Tecmo fandom website, linked here, Cited Xiaopei Things

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