Draft:Crush: Message in a Bottle
| Submission declined on 27 April 2024 by Bearcat (talk). This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of films). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.
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| Submission declined on 12 April 2024 by Bearcat (talk). This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of films). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia. | |
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Comment: This still hasn't had any new WP:GNG-worthy sourcing added since the last time it was rejected. TVO's self-published press release is still there even though I explained last time that it isn't acceptable sourcing, because it's a directly-affiliated source and not third-party coverage — and the only new things that have been added are podcasts in which Maya Gallus is talking about her own film in the first person, not GNG-building third-party coverage in real media, even though the first reviewer also already told you not to use podcasts.
So we still only have the exact same two acceptable sources as last time, and that's still not enough. Bearcat (talk) 01:59, 27 April 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: You have not markedly improved the draft since the last time it was rejected. The footnotes are to primary sources directly affiliated with the claims -- the self-published catalogues of film festivals that screened the film do not establish notability, and neither do TVO's own press releases announcing the scheduling of its own "TVO Original" programming. Notability requires third-party media coverage in third-party sources, fully independent of the claims being made -- so The Globe and Mail and POV are fine, but still not in and of themselves enough, and you haven't added anything new that counts at all. Bearcat (talk) 23:22, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: This might be notable but it needs a lot of work. The refs to film festivals and primary sources should be removed, podcasts too. Any independent film reviews and other news coverage should be used as refs. BuySomeApples (talk) 01:04, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
| Crush: Message in a Bottle | |
|---|---|
| Directed by | Maya Gallus |
| Written by | Maya Gallus |
| Produced by | Howard Fraiberg Maya Gallus |
| Cinematography | John Tran |
| Edited by | Dave Kazala |
| Music by | Garth Stevenson |
| Distributed by | Red Queen Productions |
| Country | Canada |
| Language | English |
"Crush: Message in a Bottle" is a cinematic documentary following a year in the life of artisanal winemakers and growers during one of the most historically difficult harvests in the Niagara region.[1]
Featuring winegrower Ann-Marie Saunders (whose Jamaican-lineage family are pioneers in the region, dedicated to labour intensive regenerative farming)[2], winemaker Kelly Mason (a first generation female farmer devoted to the risky, hands on craft of low intervention wild ferment winemaking), winemaker Shiraz Mottiar (celebrated as the "King of Gamay", who actively promotes diversity and sustainability in the industry), as well as esteemed winemaker Thomas Bachelder[3] (trained in Burgundy, now dedicated to exploring the various terroir of the Niagara region).[4]
The film premiered at the Devour: the Food Film Fest! on October 28, 2023, followed by several international film festival screenings, including the Santa Barbara Film Festival and the Most Festival internacional de Cinema del Vi i el Cava in the Penedes where it received the Sustainability Award.[5]
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- ^ TVO (2 November 2023). "Niagara Region winemakers weather a punishing harvest season in Crush: Message in a Bottle". TVO.
- ^ Forest, C. (2022, April 5). Crush Review: A Zestful Celebration of Ontario’s Wineries. POV Magazine
- ^ Tasting Together. (2023, November 8). Crush: Message in a Bottle, Grey Cup Eats, Wines of Nova Scotia [S1E4]. In Tasting Together (Interview with Maya Gallus re: Crush). Apple Podcasts. https://podcasts.apple.com/ca/podcast/crush-message-in-a-bottle-grey-cup-eats-wines-of-nova-scotia/id1709147642?i=1000634140459
- ^ The Globe and Mail. (2022, June 30). New Canadian film captures the growing pains of winemaking in Niagara. The Globe and Mail.
- ^ Rock and Grapes Presents. (2023, November 15). Canadian filmmaker Maya Gallus and her new documentary Crush: Message in a Bottle [S1E21]. Buzzsprout. https://www.buzzsprout.com/1804899/13974541