Draft:Friends Of Chile Benefit Concert (1974)

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Declined by Suitskvarts 4 months ago. Last edited by Suitskvarts 4 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: "In a high state of intoxication"?.. It reads weird and the reference provided doesn't say that. Suitskvarts (talk) 08:55, 28 December 2023 (UTC)

The Friends Of Chile Benefit Concert was organized by folk singer Phil Ochs. It included Phil Ochs, Pete Seeger, Arlo Guthrie, Dave Van Ronk, Dennis Hopper, Gato Barbieri, Mike Love, Dennis Wilson, Melanie, & Bob Dylan.^[1] In a high state of intoxication, the performers entertained the crowd at the Felt Forum now called the Hulu Theater on May 9th, 1974 to raise awareness of the 1973 Chilean coup d'état. Ochs was motivated by the murder of singer, performer, and personal friend Víctor Jara who was kidnapped, tortured, and executed by the Pinochet regime in the days after the coup.^[2]

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James, Peter (2006). Warehouse Eyes. Lulu.com. p. 18. ISBN 9781411680845.
Dettmar, Kevin (2009). The Cambridge Companion to Bob Dylan. Cambridge University Press. p. 32. ISBN 9781139828437.

References[edit]

[1] "Bob Dylan live 'friends for Chile' benefit 1974 Carnegie Hall 1962".

[2] "Bob Dylan and Dennis Hopper secret performance an Evening with Salvador Allende on Boo-Hooray".

[3] "Friends of Chile Benefit Concert Programme".

[4] "Various Artist / A Day the Friends of Chile Benefit Concert / 2CDR".

[5] "Friends of Chile Benefit 1974 (Dylan content)".

[6] "Friends of Chile 5/9/74".

[7] ttp://www.bjorner.com/74%201-6.htm

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