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Instructions · What links here · Haddon Travelling Scholarship (talk: + · bio) · (log) · Copyvios report · reFill · Citation Bot · (Search: Google, Bing, Wikipedia) · Submitted 43 days ago by Spgshow666 (talk: D · +) · Last edited 33 days ago by AWN08

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Declined by Randompersonediting 56 days ago. Last edited by AWN08 33 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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The Haddon Travelling Scholarship was a program set up in the early 20th Century^[1] honouring Ada and Robert Joseph Haddon to support Australia's top young architects travelling internationally to explore cities worldwide, later sharing their findings with colleagues. In Haddon's will, he made provision for a travelling scholarship, the richest of its kind^[2]^[3] known as the Robert and Ada Haddon architectural bequest. The scholarship was first awarded in 1934.^{[citation needed]}

The award carried a travelling scholarship to the approximate value of £300 and was assessed by three criteria. Firstly, a competition in designing and planning with competitors given thirteen weeks within which to complete design drawings. Secondly, general excellence in architectural studies. Thirdly, excellence in practical office work and personal character.^[4]

List of notable Haddon Travelling Scholarship recipients[edit]

Mr. H. S. O'Mahony

Alan Ralton ^[5]

Robin Boyd (architect)^[6]^[7]

Peter Crone^[8]

J. Dale Fisher FRAIA^[9]

Roy McCowan Simpson^[10]

Marcus White^[11]

References[edit]

^ "Mr. T. O'Mahony's Success". trove.nla.gov.au. 1936. Retrieved 15 November 2023.
^ Islip, John (May 1939). "Haddon Scholarship Architectural 1939-Award". Journal of the Royal Victorian Institute of Architects. 37 (3): 78–95.
^ Simon Reeves; James Dale Fisher jnr (2021). "Architecture was his life and passion". theage.com.au. Retrieved 1 Feb 2023.
^ R.V.I.A (March 1939). "Minutes of general meeting of the R.V.I.A. held in the basement demonstration theatre of the State Electricity Commission of Victoria, 238 Flinders Street, Melbourne". Journal of the Royal Victorian Institute of Architects. Xxxvii (1): 30. hdl:11343/112375.
^ Goad, Philip (2006). Bates Smart: 150 years of Australian architecture. Thames & Hudson.
^ Borland, Kevin; Evans, Doug; Borland, Huan Chen; Hamann, Conrad (2006). Architecture from the heart. RMIT University Press. ISBN 978-1-921166-20-4.
^ Niall, Brenda (2007). The Boyds: A Family Biography (Illustrated ed.). Melbourne Univ. Publishing. p. 437. ISBN 978-0522853841.
^ "Eminent modernist architect Peter Crone dies". ArchitectureAU.com. Retrieved 15 November 2023.
^ Simon Reeves; James Dale Fisher jnr (2021). "Architecture was his life and passion". theage.com.au. Retrieved 1 Feb 2023.
^ "AS Hook Address". ArchitectureAU.com. 1997. Retrieved 1 Feb 2023.
^ "Researcher Profile". Swinburne.edu.au. Retrieved 15 November 2023.

[1] "Mr. T. O'Mahony's Success". trove.nla.gov.au. 1936. Retrieved 15 November 2023.

[2] Islip, John (May 1939). "Haddon Scholarship Architectural 1939-Award". Journal of the Royal Victorian Institute of Architects. 37 (3): 78–95.

[3] Simon Reeves; James Dale Fisher jnr (2021). "Architecture was his life and passion". theage.com.au. Retrieved 1 Feb 2023.

[4] R.V.I.A (March 1939). "Minutes of general meeting of the R.V.I.A. held in the basement demonstration theatre of the State Electricity Commission of Victoria, 238 Flinders Street, Melbourne". Journal of the Royal Victorian Institute of Architects. Xxxvii (1): 30. hdl:11343/112375.

[Bates_Smart:_150_years_of_Australian_architecture-5] Goad, Philip (2006). Bates Smart: 150 years of Australian architecture. Thames & Hudson.

[Kevin_Borland_2006-6] Borland, Kevin; Evans, Doug; Borland, Huan Chen; Hamann, Conrad (2006). Architecture from the heart. RMIT University Press. ISBN 978-1-921166-20-4.

[Niall-Boyds2007-7] Niall, Brenda (2007). The Boyds: A Family Biography (Illustrated ed.). Melbourne Univ. Publishing. p. 437. ISBN 978-0522853841.

[8] "Eminent modernist architect Peter Crone dies". ArchitectureAU.com. Retrieved 15 November 2023.

[9] Simon Reeves; James Dale Fisher jnr (2021). "Architecture was his life and passion". theage.com.au. Retrieved 1 Feb 2023.

[10] "AS Hook Address". ArchitectureAU.com. 1997. Retrieved 1 Feb 2023.

[11] "Researcher Profile". Swinburne.edu.au. Retrieved 15 November 2023.

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