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Declined by Modussiccandi 9 months ago. Last edited by TommyOwen2000 4 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: The problem with this article as currently constituted is that its sources merely show that this club existed. What we really need to see is substantial analysis of Helensburgh Thistle F.C. (i.e. something more in-depth than a news report). Modussiccandi (talk) 19:58, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Helensburgh Thistle F.C. is a British Assocation Football Club (Soccer) based in Helensburgh, NSW, the most Northern town in the district of Illawarra. They play at Rex Jackson Oval. Having being founded Pre-Australian Federation, Helensburgh Thistle is one of few contunious running soccer clubs that has been operating since colonial times.

Founded in 1890^[1], originally playing under the name of Helenburgh Rovers. They played their first recorded match in their history against Caledonians on 24th of May 1890. In 1894, they started being listed on team sheetsas the 'Helensburgh Boomerangs'.^[2] First listed as Helensburgh Thistle in the 1903 season in which they were locals champions in both the Mens and Boys league.^[3]

References[edit]

^ "FOOTBALL". Sydney Morning Herald. 1890-05-29. Retrieved 2023-08-04.
^ "Minmi Rangers v. Helensburgh Boomerangs". Newcastle Morning Herald and Miners' Advocate. 1894-06-11. Retrieved 2023-08-04.
^ "HELENSBURGH". Illawarra Mercury. 1903-10-17. Retrieved 2023-08-04.

[1] "FOOTBALL". Sydney Morning Herald. 1890-05-29. Retrieved 2023-08-04.

[2] "Minmi Rangers v. Helensburgh Boomerangs". Newcastle Morning Herald and Miners' Advocate. 1894-06-11. Retrieved 2023-08-04.

[3] "HELENSBURGH". Illawarra Mercury. 1903-10-17. Retrieved 2023-08-04.

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