Draft:Pavlani Massacre
Submission declined on 26 December 2023 by Theroadislong (talk).
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| Submission declined on 25 December 2023 by Qcne (talk). This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject. Declined by Qcne 4 months ago. | |
| Submission declined on 25 December 2023 by Theroadislong (talk). This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject. Declined by Theroadislong 4 months ago. | |
Comment: remove "regrettable" and actually describe in a neutral tone what transpired. Theroadislong (talk) 08:59, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: content like "a dark chapter", " fateful day", " tragic event", "merciless massacre", "The brutality ", "heinous acts" is NOT neutral tone. Theroadislong (talk) 21:13, 25 December 2023 (UTC)
On May 14, 1999.[1], Pavlani experienced a significant incident in its history during the last war. On this day, the community witnessed a regrettable event marked by the loss of lives[2]. The incident transpired as villagers gathered in their homes, and regrettable actions took place, followed by efforts to eliminate evidence by setting homes on fire. This event has left a lasting impact on Pavlani's history
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- ^ "Justice for Kosovo - Massacre at Cuska". americanradioworks.publicradio.org. Retrieved 2023-12-25.
- ^ "Today is the 22nd anniversary of the massacre in Qyshk, Pavlan, Zahaq and Llabjan-Peja". Quora. Retrieved 2023-12-25.
https://balkaninsight.com/2018/05/14/kosovo-mourns-civilians-killed-in-village-massacres-05-14-2018/
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