Draft:Steve Hetzel

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Declined by Actualcpscm 10 months ago. Last edited by Dogloverr16 3 months ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Submission declined on 11 July 2023 by 1TWO3Writer (talk).

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Submission declined on 10 July 2023 by KylieTastic (talk).

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Comment: This is a CV. Wikipedia is not the right place for that. Actualcpscm (talk) 12:53, 11 July 2023 (UTC)

Comment: Also format the article to look more like a Wikipedia article. Do not include categories until the draft is approved. 1TWO3Writer (talk) 11:42, 11 July 2023 (UTC)

STEVE HETZEL

CURRENT PORTLAND TRAIL BLAZERS ASSISTANT COACH

The Portland Trail Blazers won the NBA Summer League Championship under Hetzel in 2022.(2)(22)

Steve Hetzel has worked for the Portland Trail Blazers, Orlando Magic, Charlotte Hornets, Canton Charge, Detroit Pistons, Cleveland Cavaliers and San Antonio Spurs.(1)(18)

Coach Hetzel graduated from Michigan State University. He was the student manager under Head Coach, Tom Izzo. (1)