Draft:Yillmaz Schoen

Yillmaz Schoen
Yillmaz Schoen
Born	1 october 1979, 44 years old
Nationality	dutch
Occupation	ceo
Children	2

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yillmaz schoen[edit]

Yillmaz shoen (Zwolle, October 1, 1979) is a Dutch entrepreneur. He is a technological businessman who has

played a role in founding several companies, such as: iCasting, IQ-media and TradeCast

Childhood and education[edit]

Yillmaz was born in Zwolle, where he also attended elementary school, Later he continued his education at Deltion College to complete his secondary education.

Work[edit]

In February 2001, Yillmaz, together with a number of friends, started the advertising agency IQ-Media from his dorm. Fourteen years later, Yillmaz felt the urge to use his creativity, so he went on an inspiration trip to Silicon Valley, United States, with Rabobank. Here he got the inspiration to start iCasting together with a few connections. Later he set up another company, called TradeCast.^[1]