Draft talk:Marriage Course

I request the undeletion of this draft or Articles for creation submission deleted under CSD G13. Please restore the page as I intend to work on it. Jakub.cz (talk) 15:39, 14 December 2020 (UTC)

suggestion

This article can be made more generic as its current style looks like an advertisement. Marriage prep courses are popular the world over especially among Christian communities. Vikram Vincent 18:24, 3 April 2021 (UTC)

You do have a valid point - I did find a Pre-Cana article but that is not generic either (and seems poorer quality than the current draft). However, this article is not supposed to be abotu marriage prep courses. It is about "The Marriage Course" which is one specific course intended for couples already in marriages (or long term relationships). Since this specific course was done by over a million people and is used in over 100 countries across the world, I thought it might deserve its Wikipedia entry.

However, it would be useful to know more details about how to avoid sounding like an advertisement. I tried to stick to independent sources, focus on facts and not impressions... what else can be done to improve the objectivity of the article? (yes I did try to look for criticisms or negative feedback from the course but it does not seem to have appeared or been published anywhere). Jakub.cz (talk) 12:38, 21 February 2023 (UTC)