Talk:1982 Bristow Helicopters Bell 212 crash

1982 Bristow Helicopters Bell 212 crash has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: January 13, 2018. (Reviewed version).

A fact from 1982 Bristow Helicopters Bell 212 crash appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 27 October 2017 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the 1982 Bristow Helicopters Bell 212 crash was one of three fatal helicopter accidents Bristow Helicopters suffered in little more than a year in the North Sea?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2017/October. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/1982 Bristow Helicopters Bell 212 crash.

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@Eggishorn: Hello! I was referring to the section of MOS:BOLDAVOID that reads, "If the article's title does not lend itself to being used easily and naturally in the opening sentence, the wording should not be distorted in an effort to include it." However you would like to improve the article to remove the use of the exact title would be a great improvement. In addition, congratulations on a good article! Hameltion (talk, contribs) 04:37, 13 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Hameltion:, first of all, thank you for your kind words. It is gratifying to know that my efforts on this are appreciated. Thank you also for contributing to the article. I may have started this but it is now everybody's article. I understand your point, although I do think saying "The X crash occurred..." is natural. It is simpler this way so it's still an improvement. I only reverted because I misunderstood the reference in the edit summary. Thanks again. Eggishorn (talk) (contrib) 20:19, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]