Talk:1994 Progress Party national convention/GA1

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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk) 10:45, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I must say I wasn't expecting to ever see national conventions of Norwegian parties at GAN, but it is always nice to be positively surprised. I did a copyedit, but it wasn't as bad as Geschichte may have feared.

Comments
  • "On 7 February, Hagen confirmed his leadership candidacy for the electoral committee." isn't referenced.
  • I've changed "central committee" to "central board", as it translate from styre and actually models that of any other board, given that it has authority.
  • Days of the week are not included unless essential to the understanding.
  • I think arbeidsutvalg should translate executive board, but I'm not 100% sure. I think it is more understanable than "working committee".
  • Some of the refs lack accessdate (particularly the Stortinget bios).

Placing on hold. Arsenikk (talk) 10:45, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

    • I added one reference and four accessdates. I don't use it on non-websites, because those aren't "retrieved" in the same sense. Geschichte (talk) 14:44, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
      • There is of course not supposed to be accessdates on offline sources; sorry if that wasn't clear. Arsenikk (talk) 15:32, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Quick comment
  • We aren't meant to use curly quotes. Aaroncrick TALK 10:53, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
    • What's that? Geschichte (talk) 14:37, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
      • If you look carefully, there is a difference between “ ” and " ". Only the latter are supposed to be used, according to the MOS (those being the ones actually available on a normal keyboard). But nothing one can really say anything about at a GA review. Arsenikk (talk) 15:32, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
        • I guess some are present because I started writing the text in Word. Geschichte (talk) 15:38, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Congratulations with a good article. Arsenikk (talk) 15:32, 2 April 2010 (UTC) Thanks! Geschichte (talk) 15:38, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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