Talk:2005 Erbil bombing

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment[edit]

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Azhiajoy. Peer reviewers: Haleymfro.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 16:32, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

IMHO, as the creator of this page, the student assignment left it in a poor state, which I've only found out 3 years later.

  • Lots of superfluous content was added. For example, a discussion of religious terrorism in the lede, is off-topic.
    • A section on "Other Bombings that happened in Erbil", belongs in a 'See also' section, not the body text. Or on the cities page.
    • A long para on the perps. Ansar al-Sunna, is not required.
  • Headings not in normal WP format, only bolded, so had no table of contents
  • Same references used multiple times without using refnames, about 4 times over!

I have, I hope, fixed a lot of 'problems' here 220 of ßorg 16:28, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]