Talk:2015 NBL Canada Finals brawl/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:15, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

Taking this as requested. Should do this within 24 hours hopefully... JAGUAR  22:15, 20 April 2016 (UTC)

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Checking against the GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

   "According to Rainmen player Forrest Fisher, Jones tackled McMorrow to the ground and Express guard Tony Bennett followed up by hitting the center with a chair" - who is the center?

   "NBL Canada executive committee Vito Frijia, who had the bus stop in the middle of the highway" - who had the bus top? Does this mean to say that he was in the bus stop?

   "In the morning of May 2, two days after the brawl" - On the morning

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

   No original research found.

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

There were a couple of things I found confusing but overall I enjoyed reading it. It is well written, comprehensive and meets the criteria, so I'll pass this outright. JAGUAR  11:15, 21 April 2016 (UTC)

@Jaguar: I have addressed the issues you pointed out, thanks for the review. TempleM (talk) 20:12, 21 April 2016 (UTC)