Talk:2020 Macau Grand Prix

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Review: May 13, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:15, 9 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

", part of" and was part of? This sentence isn't scanning quite right for me at the moment.
"Smart Life Racing" in the lead and "Smart Racing Life" in the main text, check throughout.
"from the pole position" no need for "the".
"22 November, 2020 with" no comma needed.
"first time in 2019, the series" again, doesn't scan, are these really separate sentences?
"nearly every driver" perhaps "most drivers"
"two minutes, 34.106 seconds" it would be easier to read this as "2 minutes, 34.106 seconds"
No good reason to reduce size of text in the table.
Q1 Time -> Q1 time etc.
Check MOS:BOLD for the use of bold only, people with accessibility issues may not easily be able to pick out bold alone.
MOS FLAG, those should be explained at least on the first use.
I guess "gap" applies to the best lap time for each driver?
"to set the" to determine the
"local time" which was?
In sortable tables, linked items should be linked each time.
Does en-dash mean retired? Shouldn't it say "retired"?

That's all I have. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 09:09, 12 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thank you for taking on the review. I have made the necessary changes to the article MWright96 (talk) 13:25, 12 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Nice work, happy to promote this now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:53, 13 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]