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This article needs a bit of a tune-up to fix some problems with usage and grammar. Examples are, "one of the most" should be "one of the more" since we are discussing one in a set and not "the most" in several sets, "conducted on" rather than "conducted of". The sentence structure is more Germanic than English. The usage in Organic Chemistry is "more highly" substituted, rather than "more complexly". (Anyway, putting an array of substituents on the phenyl ring would make it more complicated rather than complex.) Choose either substituted phenyltetrazoles or aryl tetrazoles. Laburke (talk) 17:46, 26 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]