Talk:A Ball for Daisy/GA1
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Reviewer: Gog the Mild (talk · contribs) 08:44, 18 June 2019 (UTC)
I have copy edited. Could you check and flag up any issues? Thanks.
- Could you add alt text for the image?
- Done
- "Plot" is unsourced.
- Reference 11 has a stray upright.
- Done
- "after seeing how upset his son lost a ball thanks to a dog" This phrase doesn't really make sense to me.
- "Raschka had never dreamed of winning the Caldecott was on his way to his studio to work when the committee called to tell him of his win." This seems a little confused. Possibly the sentence is trying to say too much and could be broken into two?
Gog the Mild (talk) 08:44, 18 June 2019 (UTC)
- @Gog the Mild: Thanks for your copyedit. Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 11:55, 18 June 2019 (UTC)
- Another fine little article. Promoting. Gog the Mild (talk) 12:13, 18 June 2019 (UTC)
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