Talk:Adventure Time season 7/GA2
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Reviewer: DannyMusicEditor (talk · contribs) 14:52, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
Will review over my Thanksgiving break.
Note: A little out of my comfort zone. I don't usually edit these type of articles.
Production[edit]
- There is a place that says "though" rather than "through", I believe the latter is what you mean.
- Link storyboarding to storyboard, for those unfamiliar with the concept
- You don't need to identify all the titles for those episodes that ended up in season 8. What I would like, however, is the number of episodes originally for season 7 that were excluded and added to the next season.
- "Ristaino, Andy [skronked]." Please define "skronked".
Section looks great. No complaints other than these few.
Will look at the next one later today.
Cast[edit]
- 'Include' or 'included' in the first sentence? I honestly don't know the answer to this so let me know what you think.
- Should there be a comma between 'elephant' and 'Tree Trunks'?
- Is it 'the Fire Kingdom' or just 'Fire Kingdom'? I seem to remember it without 'the', but my memory may be faulty.
Broadcast/Reception[edit]
- 'The second week-long string of episodes occurred ran' makes no sense.
- The reviews seem short - are you certain there's nothing you can add on the linked episodes, at least?
The rest looks good at a first glance. I don't watch the show often anymore, so I don't know if anything should be changed in there.
Looks good! dannymusiceditor Speak up! 04:16, 8 December 2017 (UTC)