Talk:Agreement on Friendship and Cooperation between Bosnia and Herzegovina and Croatia/GA1
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 21:44, 18 May 2013 (UTC) Review should proceed in a few days, possibly sooner. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 21:44, 18 May 2013 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
Excellent here.
Infobox[edit]
Fine.
Preparation for war[edit]
"Bosniaks were also armed." By whom? The then informal-ARBiH?
No other issues in this section.
Pressure and agreement[edit]
"Tuđman's Croatian Democratic Union (HDZ) party held important positions in the Bosnian government including the premiership and the ministry of defence, but despite this carried out a separate policy and refused for the HVO to be integrated into ARBiH." Separate reference please.
"According to Stjepan Kljuić: "we [HDZ BiH] were the same party divided into two factions and between two states." Capital W, please.
The rest is fine.
Aftermath[edit]
This section fine.
Conclusion[edit]
Excellent article! It is fantastic. Interesting bit of Balkan history. When the pending issues are addressed, I will pass the article. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 19:27, 20 May 2013 (UTC)
- They reference encyclicals. This passes, sorry for being so late. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:58, 9 June 2013 (UTC)