Talk:Agudath Israel Etz Ahayem/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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I will review this article. Cirt (talk) 06:52, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
Image review (completed) Cirt (talk) 06:41, 18 December 2008 (UTC) |
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No images used in the article, so nothing really to review here. Would it be possible to upload a free-use image to Wikimedia Commons and add it to this article? I added {{reqphotoin|Alabama}} to the article's talk page, but perhaps a posting to the talkpage of WP:Alabama might yield some results? Cirt (talk) 07:07, 17 December 2008 (UTC) |
Stability review (completed) Cirt (talk) 06:41, 18 December 2008 (UTC) |
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Good article nomination on hold[edit]
This article's Good Article promotion has been put on hold. During review, some issues were discovered that can be resolved without a major re-write. This is how the article, as of December 19, 2008, compares against the six good article criteria:
- 1. Well written?: A few issues remain to be addressed:
- Lede - Should be expanded a bit more, per WP:LEAD, to reflect a fuller and more descriptive summary of the entire article. The lede should be able to be a standalone piece.
- Small paragraphs - Several one-sentence paragraphs throughout, these should be merged into other paragraphs.
- 2. Factually accurate?: Duly cited throughout to WP:RS/WP:V sources, with good use of formatting. Passes here.
- 3. Broad in coverage?: Covers important aspects of organization as well as history, notable members etc. Passes here.
- 4. Neutral point of view?: Written in a clear and neutral manner. Passes here.
- 5. Article stability? See above. Passes here.
- 6. Images?: See above. Passes here.
Please address these matters soon and then leave a note here showing how they have been resolved. After 48 hours the article should be reviewed again. If these issues are not addressed within 7 days, the article may be failed without further notice. Thank you for your work so far. Cirt (talk) 01:01, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for the helpful comments. I've expanded the lede to more fully cover the article contents, and I've merged all one-sentence paragraphs to other paragraphs. Please let me know if you think the article needs any other improvements. Jayjg (talk) 02:57, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks, it looks a bit better. I still notice three one-sentence paragraphs - one in the lede, one in Early history, and one in Agudath Israel Etz Ahayem. Cirt (talk) 03:08, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
- Oops! I got the one in Early history now - hadn't noticed that. I couldn't find the ones in the lede or Agudath Israel Etz Ahayem, though; could you be a bit more specific? Jayjg (talk) 03:15, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks, it looks a bit better. I still notice three one-sentence paragraphs - one in the lede, one in Early history, and one in Agudath Israel Etz Ahayem. Cirt (talk) 03:08, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
Pass as GA[edit]
Thanks for responding to my above points. Great work overall on the article. Cirt (talk) 06:26, 19 December 2008 (UTC)